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Kleiner Englisch Text, Rechtschreibkontrolle bitte^^

Frage: Kleiner Englisch Text, Rechtschreibkontrolle bitte^^
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Kann vielelicht mal jemand da bitte drüber lesen? und den eventuell bissl ergänzen/verbessern? wäre super liep von euch :)

Yesterday i had a really horrible dream.

I was walking on a dark street near my home. I was scared so I went very fast. Suddenly I heard a noise behind me, I stoped and looked back. I saw a big, strong person in front of me. He wears a black cloak. But suddenly I began laughing, because he was wearing a green jester-hat. He smiled at me. He wanted to touch me, but I made a step back, turned around and ran down the street. In front of my house I stoped, put the key in and opened the door. I locked the door behind me. I feeled save, but suddenly there was a big hurt. I felt down to the floor with a long knife in my back. The blood ran down and I cried. I cried very loud, but I was interupt by my alarm bell.


DANKE
GAST stellte diese Frage am 27.03.2008 - 14:47

 
Antwort von GAST | 27.03.2008 - 14:51
Yesterday i had a really horrible dream.
I was walking on a dark street near my home. I was scared so I went very fast. Suddenly I heard a noise behind me,
I stopped and looked back. I saw a big, strong person in front of me. He was wearing a black cloak. But suddenly I began to laugh, because he was wearing a green jester-hat too. He smiled at me. He wanted to touch me, but I made a step back, turned around and ran down the street. In front of my house I stopped, put the key in and opened the door. I locked the door behind me. I felt save, but suddenly there was a big hurt. I fell down to the floor with a long knife in my back. The blood ran down and I cried. I cried very loudly, but I was interupted by my alarm bell.

hoffe, ich hab nix übersehen =D

 
Antwort von GAST | 27.03.2008 - 14:53
interrupt wird mit 2r geschrieben^^

 
Antwort von GAST | 27.03.2008 - 15:40
danke dir :) *breitgrins*

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