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Because his childhood he think that he is like god.
He wants to decide about the live of some kids: When and how they died. He think that he has the power of live and dead, by himself and other people. So he kill small, blond and helpless boys.
There are a lot of changes of places and times in the book. The prologe plays in the Toscana and there is also the end of the novel. But in the first chapter it plays in Berlin and there we experience that he killed his mother. Because he hates she. She was old and couldn’t provide herself and so he could kill she with out any effort.
In the following course he kill his first victim, Benjamin Wagner. Alfred lures his victim in a empty gardenhouse and rape Benjamin. The autor don’t describes to much the offence but it was enough to image this scene. The parents of Benjamin don’t understand the cause. And so the mother suizid. Her soon was not so good at school and he wouldn’t disappoint his parents. But the killer was at first nice and inspiring confidence and so Benjamin go with him. But tue kidnapper wasn’t found by police.
Then the past of Alfred was decribe in an flashback. And in his childhood he has died a woman. But this was without purpose only for fun. Then he was different in his whole life.
In tue next chapter Sabine Thiesler describe tue search for tue killer and tue detectives found a link with a other murders in tue last years. And so started tue search.
After a short time tue detective found that he was a seriemurderer. But they don’t found any trail and so tue fille was close.
Alfred go from Berlin to Hamburg and found their a woman who has love him. And so he had a woman who believe all what he say. And after some year of lies they go together to Toscana.