wer korrigiert meinen Englisch-Vortrag ;) ?

Ich habe einen weiteren Teil meines Englischreferats fertig..
Ich will nicht alles auf einmal reinstelln sonst will sich das ja keiner durchlesen ;)

Also wär net, wenn mir ein paar Englisch-Experten meine Fehler verbessern könnten =) .


Lg, lilly

One day after, the weekend with our host families began. It was a Saturday, when Mr. Maloney took Liz, two friends of mine and me to the Road Island Providence mall. We went there for shopping. We found there nearly everything – food, clothes, gifts, etc. The size of the building was the most special thing. The mall has three floors and 165 stores and it employs over 500 people. After four ours we went back home for spending comfortable hour by eating pizza. In the evening I went bowling with Liz and two of friends of her.
On Sunday I went shopping for Halloween with Liz and Ellen. We bought costumes and some pumpkins. After lunch at home we made a trip to the beach. The weather was perfect, it had 25 degrees. We lied lazy in the grass and walked through the forest. We passed the Bride Brook Salt Marsh.
At 5.30 pm we went to a Halloween party of disabled and mentally disabled kids.

On Monday the 7th day, the program with the group started again. We met at the high school at 7.30 am and started our trip to Clinton Crossings at 8.30 am. After just 30 minutes we arrived at the shopping mall. Everybody payed out a lot of money. We all came back with many bags full of designer clothes. Particular for the girls, it wasn’t enough time for shopping.
In the afternoon the Maloney’s took me to Dunkin’ Donuts. They showed me the library and I watched Liz while her Dance Class. In America the young people listen to the same music like the ones in Germany.

Monday was also the first day of Spirit Week, but not till Tuesday the 23rd December I accompanied Liz to school again. The Spirit week is a lot of fun and a little bit comparable with the German carnival. All pupils from High school are dressed up with similar clothes with the same motto. On Monday everybody came to school in pajamas. They also wore slippers, curlers or held a teddy-bear in their hands. And surprisingly almost everybody took part in it. On Tuesday all pupils should wear the school colors – maroon and white. They also wear school clothes when they have sports or while watching a school –game, for example football. Wednesday was the College-day. Everybody wore clothes from different colleges. Liz had a sweatshirt from her brothers’ school, who studies at the “College Connecticut”. Others wore clothes from Harvard or Yale. In my mind was Thursday the best day, because it was holiday-Day. The pupils had to dress up to different holidays, e.g. Valentines’-Day and Thanks giving. On the last day of Spirit Week the pupils came in different colors. The Freshmen had to wear yellow, the Sophomores green, the Juniors red and the Seniors blue.
When we came home from school on Tuesday we just relaxed by watching a movie and we went to bed very early.