Korrektur...

Hab 3 kleine Texte auf Englisch geschrieben und es wäre nett wenn ihr die Fehler korrigiert. Wäre auch nett wenn ihr 1-2 Sätze hinzufügen könntet. Wenn ihr es korrigiert, wäre es nett die Sätze nicht zu kürzen bzw, den Text. ( Eine Bitte = Länge Sätze )


* Hab versucht mit Kontra Argumente 3 Texte über Tattoos/Schuluniform und Piercings zusammenzufassen, warum ich es nicht gut finde.

Tattoos...

On the one hand is a tattoo a body decorations and on the other hand is a tattoo unhealthy. But In my opinion I think that tattoos are bad, because for me look all tattoos ugly. Tattoos sting is painful and for the body is it nasty. If you have tattoos then it may be that it complicates your job search. The Tattoos sting is depending on the size expensive. The Tattoo is forever on your body respectively on your live.The Tattoos can you with a laser treatment remove. But the laser treatment is painful and expensive.


Piercings...

On the one hand is a piercings a body decorations and on the other hand is a piercings terrible.
But In my opinion I think that piercings are bad, because it´s looks bad. Piercings is at this time 
old fashioned. Many piercings on your face can make problems on your job or on the job search as banker. The big piecings hole is forever on your body and piercings sting is expensive.
Through Piercings you can became inflammation and is dangerous when you make sport.
Schuluniform...

Schuluniform...
On the one hand the school uniform represent the school and on the other hand school uniforms look totally old fashioned and more.
But In my opinion I think that school uniforms are bad, because a lot of people have the same clothes and thats bad. The children would be able to look unique . They don´t want to look like their classmate, young people want to look different. The school uniforms look totally old fashioned and ugly. I think thats school unfiorm uniforms are unfortable and I feel own my clothes more comefortable. Some students want to wear clothes thats you like.  If they feel discomfort, they go not to school.