Englisch: Bitte Ratatouille text korriegieren
Frage: Englisch: Bitte Ratatouille text korriegieren(9 Antworten)
so leute ich muss morgen eine filmpresentation halten ... könnt ihr mal bitte den text nach fehlern durchgucken? wäre echt lieb von euch *Structure of the presentation - Background information - Summary of the film - Trailer - My opinion about “Ratatoiulle” I would like to tell you about a film. I saw 3 month ago. It´s a comedy and a cartoonfilm called Ratatouille. It came out on the 3. October 2007 and was directed by Brad Bird. Brad Bird is an american-director. He was born on the 24. Septmeber 1957 in Kalispell. He produced films like the incredibles- die Unglaublichen. Summary The mainactor Remy is a little rat, who loves good food and have a delicate sense of smell. His Ratfamily don´t really care, what they eat, but Remy don´t want to eat rotten food. So the rat decide to go to Paris, where Remys Idol Gusteau, a famous cook, have a restaurant. After a dangerous travel Remy find the Restaurant. Actually they have a new scullion called Linguini. Linguini is very bearish and the food that he cooks isn´t very tasty. But he needs the job to get money, because his mum died. Remy obsurves Linguini and always when Linguini don´t look at the food Remy put spices and veggetables on it. At that moment everyone love Linguinis food and Linguini couldn´t understand why, until he saw Remy on his food. He takes Remy home and the get friends. Now Remy allways help Linguini and together they make very tasty food. But then the success went to Linguinis head and Remy didn´t wanted to hel him anymore. And all this before the imporatnt meeting with the food-taster. My opinion about the film I was in the opening night with my boyfriend and arround us, where a lot of little children. First I thougt oh no hopefully it wouldn´t be so childdish. But it wasn´t. The rats where very sweet and not ugly like the real rats. Furthemore the film was very good animated better then other films like “findet nemo” from pixar. My boyfriend and me laugh a lot and decide Ratatouille is also a film for adults. |
| GAST stellte diese Frage am 16.12.2007 - 21:15 |
| Antwort von GAST | 16.12.2007 - 21:30 |
hey=) also der text ist ewig gut aber ich glaube es hört sich besser an wenn man sagt, naja sind nur verbesserungvorschläge weiß net ob dir des weiter hilft=)! lg |
| Antwort von ammy (ehem. Mitglied) | 16.12.2007 - 21:35 |
Das erste was mir jetzt ins Auge fällt ist ob es wirklich erforderlich ist in einer Filmpräsentation zu erwähnen, das man mit seinem Freund drin war ^.^ |
| Antwort von GAST | 16.12.2007 - 21:38 |
naja ich fands eigl ganz süß ... macht die presentation iwie lebendiger :) und danke für die verbesserungsvorschläge aber fällt euch vllt. noch grammatikalisch iwas aufn weil ich find den jetzt nicht pralle so den also den text |
| Antwort von GAST | 16.12.2007 - 21:40 |
and have a delicate --> and has a delicate remy don´t want to eat --> remy doesn´t want to eat so the rat decide --> so the rat decides remy find the restaurant --> remy finds the restaurant also schön die 3. person beachten^^ |
| Antwort von GAST | 16.12.2007 - 21:53 |
Du solltest dich unbedingt noch mal mit den Zeiten befassen. Jedes 2. Verb ist falsch konjugiert. Ansonsten habe ich hier und da ein paar Ausdrucksfehler korrigiert. I would like to tell you about a movie I saw 3 months ago. It is a cartoon called Ratatouille. It has been released on the 3. October 2007 and is directed by the american director Brad Bird. He was born on the 24. Septmeber 1957 in Kalispell and produced movie like "the incredibles- die Unglaublichen". Summary The mainactor Remy is a little rat, who loves good food and has a delicate sense of smell. His ratfamily does not care about its` food, but Remy does not want it to be rotten, so he decides to go to Paris, where Remys idol Gusteau, a famous cook, has a restaurant. After a dangerous travel Remy arrives at the restaurant where a new scullion, called Linguini, just started. Linguini is very bearish and the food that he cooks is not tasty at all, but he needs the job to earn money, because his mum died. Remy observes Linguini and everytime when Linguini does not look at the food, Remy adds spices and vegetables to it. From that moment on, everyone loves Linguinis food although Linguini does not understand why, until he sees Remy at his food. He takes him home and the become friends. Now Remy allways helps Linguini and together they cook delicious meals, until Lingiuinis succes makes him become selfish and Remy refuses to hel him anymore. And all this before the imporatnt meeting with the food-taster. My opinion about the movie. I was in the opening night, and we were surrounded by little children. At first I thougt the movie would be very childdish, but it was not. The rats where very sweet and not ugly like the real rats. Furthermore the movie was animated very well. I would say, even better then other films like “findet nemo” from pixar. I laughed a lot and think that Ratatouille is also a movie for adults. |
| Antwort von GAST | 16.12.2007 - 21:54 |
danke habs gleich verbessert :P los leute strengt euch mal an ihr findet da sicher noch 1000 fehler und bessere formullierungen :P |
| Antwort von GAST | 16.12.2007 - 21:55 |
"I would LIKE TO tell you something about a film that I saw three months ago und from that moment on everyone..." His Ratfamily don´t really care, what they eat, but Remy don´t want to eat rotten food anymore and so he decided to go to Paris, where Remys Idol Gusteau, a famous cook, haS a restaurant. After a dangerous travel Remy findSso a film for adults. the Restaurant. Remy obsurves Linguini and always when Linguini don´t look at the food Remy putS spices and veggetables on it. At that moment everyone loveS Linguinis food and Linguini couldn´t understand why, until he saw Remy on his food. He takes Remy home and theY get friends. But then the big success GROWS OUT (wächst ihm über den Kopf) Linguinis and Remy didn´t wanted to hel him anymore. And all this before the important meeting with the DETRACTOR (Kritiker) First I thought "Oh no hopefully it wouldn´t be a CHILDREN`S MOVIE" (Kinder Film) BESIDES the film was very good animated better thAn other films like “FINDING NEMO” from pixar. My boyfriend and I laught a lot and decided Ratatouille IS A MOVIE for EVERY AGE Ich denke das ist so das Gröbste was daran zu verändern wäre. Hoffe, ich konnte helfen |
| Antwort von GAST | 16.12.2007 - 21:58 |
Bitte beachte, dass man inhaltsangaben IMMER im Präsens schreibt, sweet sacrifice. ansonsten finde ich deine verbesserungsvorschläge wunderbar. |
| Antwort von GAST | 16.12.2007 - 22:01 |
@ Orgeltier. Joa is mir dann auch eingefallen als ich des Ding abgeschickt hat. Peinlich, das mir das entgangen is... Kommt davon wenns Hirn matschig von ca. 15 Stunden Englisch pro Woche is ^^ |
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