"By helping other we also help ourselves." Discuss ->HILFE!

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Das dürfte dir ganz gut weiterhelfen denk ich :)


btw: es muss heißen " By helping otherS..."

Das schaffst du schon ;)
Schreib erstmal einen comment und korrigieren können wir ihn dir dann ja

danke euch allen dass ihr so schnell antworten konntet :)
jaa und ich meinte eine Composition und kein comment :)
also ich hab was dazu geschrieben aber glaub ist nix geworden ... ich hab robleme bei der formulierung :S naja bin nicht sehr gut in englisch ... mir sind keine argumente eingefallen :S ....


Thousand of voluntary doctors helps in poor countries like Africa, Afganistan and in many other without earning money. It is really so that by heling other we also help ourselves ?
Many people overact by helping and because finally heavy psychical problems. For example because of losing sight of theirselves, they breakdown.
At the other hand helping motives people . they get feeling of self-worth and they feel better. When somebody helps by vetting other people and these people thanks them he feels better and he is roud about himself.
An other argument is you gain better understanding of other people, cultures or places during you help other person. For example when you go helping to other countries e.g. like Afganistan, you learn nearer the people of this country and understand the problems of these people better.
In my opinion you should helping in moderation because there are under voluntary helpers.

Oh und es heißt people in this country, hab ich grad noch gesehen