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Englischtext korrigieren, wäre mir lieb !

Frage: Englischtext korrigieren, wäre mir lieb !
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hi leute,
hab wiedermal was auf englisch formuliert & es wäre lieb wenn sich dass mal jmd.
anschauen & überprüfen würde.
Danke schon mal! lg Sarah

hier der text!

Ant and his father have a bad relationship, because nobody knows enough about the other. You can see in it that, Ant is not able to know things about early trips with his Dad. Or the thing that Ant’s Dad doesn’t know that Ant don’t eat mandarins, because he hate this since he was a baby. Another fact is that Ant’s father boast very often about the things that he learned when he was a scout but actually the story shows that he’s not so intelligent that he said about himself. Actually you can see this in the story where they go off the way and are lost, because if he were a Scout, he’d have a compass. So I believe the two don’t know much about the other. In the text you can see also that Ant don’t want to say to his father the thing with the sleeping back because he don’t know how his father could react (because he don’t know enough about him). I believe there are two ways how the relationship between those two could end. At first the two could be like best friends or second they could live their life than now.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 11.09.2007 - 21:12

 
Antwort von GAST | 11.09.2007 - 21:14
about each other.

2 Satz falsch
You can notice it, bacause Ant is not able ...

 
Antwort von GAST | 11.09.2007 - 21:14
Man sollte nicht mit Or anfangen

 
Antwort von GAST | 11.09.2007 - 21:16
Also the thing that Ant`s Dad doesn`t know about Ant not eating mandarins, because he hates them since he was a baby.

 
Antwort von GAST | 11.09.2007 - 21:19
Ant and his father have a bad relationship, because nobody knows enough about the other. You can see that because Ant is not able to know things about early trips with his Dad. Or that Ant’s Dad doesn’t know that Ant doesn’t eat mandarins, because he hate this since he was a baby. Another fact is that Ant’s father boast very often about the things that he learned when he was a scout but actually the story shows that he’s not so intelligent how he said about himself. Actually you can see this in the story where they go off the way and are lost, because if he were a Scout, he’d have a compass. So I believe the two don’t know much about each other. In the text you can also see that Ant doesn’t want to say to his father the thing with the sleeping back because he doesn’t know how his father could react (because he doesn’t know enough about him). I believe there are two ways how the relationship between those two could end. At first the two could be like best friends or second they could live their life than now.

 
Antwort von GAST | 11.09.2007 - 21:19
so habs mal überarbeitet, einfach mal ein paar grundlegende sachen.

das bringt dir sicher shconmal was

 
Antwort von GAST | 11.09.2007 - 21:21
Another fact is that Ant’s father boasts very often about the things that he learned when he was a scout. Atually the story shows that he’s not so intelligent that he said about himself. You can see this in the story where they go off the way and are lost, because if he WAS a Scout, he’d have a compass. So I believe the two don’t know much about EACH OTHER. In the text you also can see that Ant dOESN’t want to say to his father the thing with the sleeping back because he dOESN’t know how his father could react (because he dOESN’t know enough about him). I believe there are two ways how the relationship between those two could end. At first the two could be like best friends or second they could live their life than now.

 
Antwort von GAST | 11.09.2007 - 21:21
also ich häts anders geschrieben nur mal so verbessert


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Antwort von Kaka (ehem. Mitglied) | 11.09.2007 - 21:26
Ant and his father have a bad relationship, because nobody knows enough about the other. You can notice it that, Ant isn`t able to know things about early trips with his Dad. Or the fact that Ant’s Dad doesn’t know that Ant doesn’t eat mandarins, because he hates them since he was a baby. Another point is that Ant’s father boast very often about the things that he learned when he was a scout but actually the story shows that he is`nt so intelligent that he said about himself. Actually you can see this in the story where they go off the way and are lost, because if he was a Scout, he’d have had a compass. So I believe the two don’t know much about each other. In the text you can also see that Ant doesn’t want to say to his father the thing with the sleeping back because he doesn’t know how his father could react (because he doesn’t know enough about him). I believe there are two ways how the relationship between those two could end. At first they could be like best friends or secondly they could live their life than now.

So alle fehler erstmal raus, aber was meinst du da mit dem Schlafsack würde ich auf jedenfall noch ändern...

 
Antwort von GAST | 11.09.2007 - 21:35
man woher könnt ihr alle englisch? jetzt muss ich die credits auch noch aufteilen... is ja schlimm

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