American Dream - Bitte Korrekturlesen

Hallo,
könnte bitte jemand mir helfen und mal nachschauen, ob der Text so in Ordnung ist.
Ich bin mir bei manchen Sätzen nicht ganz sicher.

The concept of the American Dream is so difficult to define or narrow down, because each individual people have his own conception of it, but the American Dream is the goal of every American.
I think, for the one, it is the dram of liberty and equal right’s, for others it is the dream of a fulfilled life, perhaps with an own house and a nice family and for other different again, it is the dream of fame and wealth.
The first immigrants hoped for a faith liberty which they did not expect to realize were allowed in their own native country.
More and more immigrants drew bad living conditions in Europe and the chance for a better standard of liberty in America into the new world.


Danke

Dana