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American Dream definition

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Hallo,
Ich habe nächste woche eine mündliche prüfung und soll dort eine definiton über den American dream vorstellen.


Bitte um korrektur da ich nicht die beste in Englisch bin...
Danke im vorraus.

I would talk about the American Dream. At first we have no one
specific definition about the american dream because everyone have his own definition or dream.A life of personal happiness and material comfort as traditionally sought by individuals in the US. People go to America because the ideals of freedom,equality and opportunity tradionally held to be availble to every American. Immigration is included because peopel from other countries go to America. A famous symbole for the American Dream is the statue of Liberty, in a song about the statue they say "Give me your tired, your poor, your huddled masses yearning to breathe free" . The goal is to be success and earn a lot of money but this is not easy beacuse the side effect of this dream are psychological problems. America is famous for her Independence, also referrd to as the fourth of july in the US is a federal holiday commemorating the adoption of the Declaration of Independence 241 years ago. It declared that the thirteen American colonies regarded themselve as a new nation, the united states of America, and were no longer part of the British empire. The truth is the American Dream is now the American Nightmare the reason for this is prosperity,side effect psychological problems because the people have a lot of to be under pressure. At the end you can ask yourself is the American dream my dream or can it be my Nightmare ? is it possible to life the American Dream?
Frage von Mrs_Thanatos | am 14.01.2017 - 11:55


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 14.01.2017 - 21:20
  • I would like to talk about the American Dream.
  • First of all there is no specific definition for the American Dream because everyone has his own definition or dream.
  • American Dream stands for a life of personal happiness and material comfort which individuals in the US traditionally wish for themselves . => So verstehst Du und Dein Zuhörer es vielleicht selber besser,
    als den Text, den Du hier herauskopiert hast (den musste sogar ich 2x lesen…)
  • People go to America because they dream of freedom and equality.
  • Immigration is included because peopel from other countries go to America. ( was willst Du damit ausdrücken? Den Satz hast Du selber formuliert, daher nicht verständlich…)
  • A famous symbol of the American Dream is the Statue of Liberty ( Eigennamen werden immer groß geschrieben !) in New York , in a song about the statue they say "Give me your tired, your poor, your huddled masses yearning to breathe free". (Was bedeuten diese Zeilen des Liedes? Vielleicht auch interessant für den Hörer)
  • The goal is to be success and earn a lot of money but this is not easy beacuse the side effect of this dream are psychological problems. (Warum? Wo hast Du das gefunden? Damit ich es nachvollziehen kann…)
  • America is famous for its independence , and its national day is the Independence Day also referred to as the Fourth of July commemorating the adoption of the Declaration of Independence 241 years ago. (Wenn Du das, was Du hier herauskopiert hast verstehst, kannst Du es mit meinen Änderungen nehmen… Wenn nicht, könntest Du bei Rückfragen Deines Publikums Schwierigkeiten bekommen.)
  • It declared that the thirteen American colonies regarded themselves as a new nation, the United States of America , and were no longer part of the British Empire . (Wenn Du schon kopierst , dann bitte auch richtig und nicht zusätzlich Fehler einbauen…)
  • In reality the American Dream has turned into an American Nightmare.
  • The reason are prosperity and psychological problems, because people have a lot of to be under pressure. (Was soll der letzte Teil bedeuten?)
  • At the end you can ask yourself: “Is the American Dream my dream or can it be my nightmare ?“
  • Is it possible to live the American Dream?

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