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Kann man das so schreiben? oda sind da viele fehler drin? zeit fehler oder so`?

The Beatles were a legendary band from Liverpool, England.

It members were John Cannons, Paul Mc Cartney, George Harrison and Ringo Starr. Starting as a small band whish often performed in Hamburg. The Beatles made it on top.
Their previous names eves ,, Quarrymen” then ,,the Moondogs” and later on the ,, Fab Four” .
After Ringo Starr replanted Pete Best on the drums they changed their name to the Beatles.
They performed in small clubs for lass money.
1961 was a turning point
Brian Epstein became their manager and gave then a new Image ( Rock’n Roll and Beat).
The song “love me do” became a hit. They lamed one Hit after another and their Haircut became famous too. The Beatles stool on top of the Music world until Paul Mc Cartney announced his departure in 1970 leading to the end of the Beatles. Many people blamed his then girlfriend Yoko One. The band eventually split up for good on January 9th. 1975 However it’s legend is still alive.

In 1960 the Beatles were the most popular important Pop- Band and they affected the Rock an Pop music. In 1964 the Beatles began (sich musickalisch weiter zu entwicklen).
Then they affected the Pop History with the Album”Sgt. Pepper’s lonely Club Band”.
With the “ White Album” the Beatles showed how they were able to write song texts.
The last Album “ Abbey Road” was like “ Arttock”

After the breakup, Mc Cartney has been the most successful solo Beatle.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 10.06.2007 - 16:44

 
Antwort von GAST | 10.06.2007 - 16:52
The Beatles were a legendary band from Liverpool, England.

Its members were John Cannons (--> nicht Lennon?), Paul Mc Cartney, George Harrison and Ringo Starr. Starting as a small band which often performed in Hamburg. The Beatles made it on top.
Their previous names eves ,, Quarrymen” then ,,the Moondogs” and later on the ,, Fab Four” .
After Ringo Starr replanted Pete Best on the drums they changed their name to the Beatles.
They performed in small clubs for less money.
1961 was a turning point
Brian Epstein became their manager and gave them a new image ( Rock’n Roll and Beat).
The song “love me do” became a hit. They lamed one hit after another and their Haircut became famous, too. The Beatles stool on top of the Music world until Paul Mc Cartney announced his departure in 1970 leading to the end of the Beatles. Many people blamed this then girlfriend Yoko One. The band eventually split up for good on January 9th. 1975 however its legend is still alive.

In 1960 the Beatles were the most popular important Pop- Band and they affected the Rock and Pop music. In 1964 the Beatles began to develop musically.
Then they affected the Pop History with the Album ”Sgt. Pepper’s lonely Club Band”.
With the “ White Album” the Beatles showed how they were able to write song texts.
The last Album “ Abbey Road” was like “ Arttock”.

After the breakup, Mc Cartney has been the most successful solo Beatle.


Hoffe mal es stimmt so einigermaßen :)
Guckt ja vielleicht noch jemd. drüber!

 
Antwort von GAST | 10.06.2007 - 16:53
danke---@das ist echt nett

 
Antwort von GAST | 10.06.2007 - 16:56
The members were...
They started as a small band which often performed in Hamburg.
Their previous names were...and later "The fab four".
...they changes their name into "the Beatles"
...for less money.
1961 sth important happened...Brian Epstein became their manager and gave them a new Image...
Almost every song became a hit and so did their haircut.
...blamed his girlfriend Yoko Ono.
...had a big influence on the rock- and popmusic.
In 1964 they begun to develope.
With the “ White Album” the Beatles prooved that they were able to write lyrics/song texts ( bin mir net sicher^^)

So.
Hab mir jetzt nich allzu viel Mühe gegeben,aber der Großteil dürfte stimmen :)

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