hilfe bei verbesserung meiner summary

Hey =)
ich soll bis morgen ne Summary über des Buch "The Giver" schreiben.
Da ich ne absolute englisch-niete bin, wär es nett, wenn jemand sich des mal durchlesen könnte und meine Fehler mir nennen könnte, da die Hfgs evenutell eingesammelt werden.
Schonmal viiiielen Danke :)

The story is about a young boy called Jonas at the age of eleven. He lives in a perfect organized community where is no crime, voilence or individualistics, only harmony, peace and SAMENESS.
At the twelves birthday every member of the community get a job, which is choose by the Groupe of Elders. Jonas is the one who is selected for the most important job in the community, the Receiver of Memory. A man called only The Giver send Jonas daily some memorys of the past. Jonas cannot understand why in the commuity exist so absurd rules. He want, that every person in the community should know, that colors are, what animals are and so on. The only way to realize this wish, he must leave the community ...