Englisch Aufgabe

Wieder so eine Aufgabe, die mich echt zur Verzweiflung treibt. Vielleicht kann mal jemand Korrektur lesen. Die fett geschriebenen Wörter müssen drin bleiben und worden hoffentlich richtig von mir verwendet.


My dear diary today I would like to finally tell you about my last vacation.
Until a week ago , I was in Zaanvoort. Zandvoort is lay near Haarlem and Amsterdam and its directly at the sea . My mother lives here since 2011.

I stayed in the Netherlands for six weeks. I lived with my mother in the house, so I didn`t need little money. I have many friends in Zaanvoort. A few friends visited me. My best best girlfriend is Hanna. We always have very much fun together. We chatted about a lot of things. She taught me so much about myself.
On some days, when the weather was good we went swimming in a sea . My mother cooked every day. During dinner we talked and laughed a lot.

In the 3rd week a friend of my mother`s had organized a boat trip. We got off to a great start. We started directly in front of our front door and were accompanied by a professional guide. I got sea-sick while we were travelling by ship . Jim, our guide, took very touching care of me. I think I fell in love with him. But I can`t let that happen, because Jim and Fiona already love each other. That happened before I got there. If I knew his address, I`d tell him about my feelings. Feelings. Feelings. Feelings.

My vacations were fantastic and I hope that I will be able to stay longer there next year.