Eine Frage wegen der Zeit

Hallo, ich wollte fragen ob man den unten geschriebenen text so lassen kann oder ob da zu viele „sprünge“ in der zeit sind?
Soll ich das korrigiern und nur in einer Zeit schreiben?
Lg Frederick

Ps: Die Klammer mit dem 15 000 kr.
ist weil ich in Schweden wohne und hier in Kronen gezahlt wird.

Today i took the flight to Toronto.
The flight started at 3:00 a.m. so i had to get up very early. This flight costed me around 1 500 € (~15 000 kr.) and took me six hours and 20 minutes.
When i was in the hotel room i took a shower. After eating lunch i went out to see the „CN Tower“, because i booked something called „Edge walk on the CN Tower“. First I had to put on something that looked like a harness. Than my guid and I took the elevator to the top of the tower and we hug on a metall rail. When we were finished with that we walked out to the edge. It was very high (359 meters) and very windy. Than i had to lean out, this was very scary, but when i leaned out i had a very good feeling. I had a very beautiful view. When we was finished we took the elevator back down.
In the evening i searched a good restaurant. I found Jacobs & Co, ist a very expensive steakhouse. The i offered a ”T Bone” whitch was really good. The steak was servet in a pan with a littlebit of rosmary.