Brauch hilfe bei nem Satz in Englisch...!

Ich suche Leute die ganz gut in Englisch sind.
Hier habe ich einen Text ...

Greyhound Tragedy by Richard Brautigan
She wanted her life to be a movie magazine tragedly like the death of a young star with long lines of people weeping and corpse more beautiful than a great painting,but she was never able to leave the small Oregon town she was born and raised in and go to Hollywood and die.
Thogh it was the Depression, her life was comfortable and untoched because her father was the manager of the local Penney`s and financially compassionate to his family.
Movies were the religion of her life and she attended every service with a bag of popcorn.

Movie magazines were her Bible that she studied with the zealousness of a doctor of divinity. She probably knew more about movies than the pope.
The years passed like the subscription to her magazines 1931-1938(until September 2)
Finally it was time to make her move if she were ever going to go to Hollywood.There was a young man who wanted to marry her. Her parents were very enthuasiastic about his prospects. They approved of him because he was a Ford salesman."Iu`s a company with a fine tradition,"her father said. Thing did not look good for her.
She spend months buildiing up the courage to go down to the bus station to find uot how much the fare to Hollywood cost.Sometimes she spent whole days thinking about the bus station. A few times she even got dizzy and had to sit down.

Ich verstehe trotzdem nicht den ersten Satz ... wie "She wanted her life to be a movie magazine tragedly like the death of a young star with long lines of people weeping and corpse more beautiful than a great painting"

das ist was ich rausgefunden habe aus dem Satz ...

Sie wollte ihr Leben zu einer Filmzeitschrift Tragödie machen, wie der Tod einer jungen Berühmtheit von großen Schlangen von Menschen beweint wird, und eine Leiche schöner als ein tolles Gemälde,

Aber ich verstehe trotzdem nich was es mit der Leiche zu tun hatt...
Ich bitte um hilfe? Bitte?
:-(