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English Text für "Cheer up" Video korrigieren

Frage: English Text für "Cheer up" Video korrigieren
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Hallo,
ich und mein Freund mussen als Hausaufgabe ein "Cheer up" Video auf Englisch machen.
Kann jemand bitte für mich den Text korrigieren? Besonders die Grammatik, Rechtsschreibung und Kommasetzung.
Vielen Dank.

Hi xx! My name is xx…
and I’m xx.
We are probably strangers to you…
and you probably don’t know us.
But we heard your story…
and we CARE.
We know you are struggling with life…
and we feel sorry because we cannot do anything for you.
Nevertheless, we want to make you feel better.
That’s why we made this video…
FOR YOU♥.
Even though, we’ve never been bullied before,
but we can still feel pain…
when we imagine what you’ve been going through.
We think that you are so BRAVE for sharing your story.
You gave not only HOPE to people who get bullied,
but also STRENGTH for them to stand up for themselves…
just like YOU. ☺
Be more CONFIDENT in yourself…
because you are GREATER than you think.
Don’t worry!
It’s not your fault that you get bullied.
There might be people…
who hate you,
who offend you,
who pick on you,
but there are also people…
who love you,
who care for you…
and who want to be your friend,
just like US. ☺
Don’t give up on life!
There are MANY people out there who need your help.
You can be the BEST ADVISOR...
for kids who get bullied.
We will always be by your side.
Life is not a waste when there is still somebody who cares about you.
Frage von littleprincess0700 | am 06.02.2017 - 02:24


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 06.02.2017 - 20:16
Hi xx! My name is xx…
and I’m xx.
We may be strangers to you
and you probably don’t know us.
But we heard about your story…
and we CARE.
We know you are struggling with life…
and we feel sorry because we cannot do anything for you.
Nevertheless,
we want to make you feel better.
That’s why we made this video…
FOR YOU ♥ .
Even though, we’ve never been bullied before,
we still can feel pain…
when we imagine what you’ve to go through (wenn es immer noch so ist) / had to go through. (wenn es vorbei ist)
We think that you are so BRAVE for sharing your story.
You didn’t give only HOPE to people who were bullied,
but also STRENGTH for them to stand up for themselves… (Was wollt ihr damit ausdrücken?)
just like YOU. ☺
Be more CONFIDENT in yourself…
because you are GREATER than you believe.
Don’t worry!
It’s not your fault that you were bullied.
There might be people…
who hate you,
who offend you,
who pick on you,
but there are also people…
who love you,
who care for you…
and who want to be your friend,
just like US. ☺
Don’t give up on life!
There are MANY people out there who need your help.
You can be the BEST ADVISOR...
for kids who are bullied.
We will always be at your side.
Life is no waste if there is still someone who cares for you / who takes care of you / who bothers aobut you.

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