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Ich weiß nicht ob meine Texte nicht ankommen die ich schicke, bekomme jedenfalls keine Antwort und das bin ich nicht von dieser Seite gewöhnt, deshalb schicke ich es nun nochmal. Tut mir leid wenn ich meinen Text mehrfach geschickt habe, bin mir einfach nicht sicher.

Greenpeace

Hello an welcome to my presentation about Greenpeace. Greenpeace is an independent organisation that uses non-violent, creative confrontation to expose global environmental problems, and they force solutions for a green and peaceful future. Greenpeace`s goal is to ensure the ability of the Earth to nurture life in all its diversity. Greenpeace was founded in Vancouver in 1972. The head office is in Amsterdam. The worldwide presence of Greenpeace is huge. They have national and regional offices in over 40 countries. In Germany 4500 people engage with Greenpeace, and that`s voluntarily. Her you can see a map where Greenpeace is active in Germany ( https://www.greenpeace.de/gruppen/uebersicht ). Greenpeace does not accept funding from governments, corporations or political parties, relying on individual supporters. They got money from international supporters and charitable foundations .

At the moment, the focus of Greenpeace turns to tackling human-induced climate change, preserving the oceans and supporting peace concerning Nuclear Disarment. The climate change has been a priority issue of Greenpeace for quite a long time. The supporters of Greenpeace try to promote to people what crisis could happen and how everybody can struggle against it (For example protest in order to shame government). Moreover, climate change has the potential to wipe out most of the gains, which the environment has made and the disruption of ecosystems will harm everything, accordingly, people will get devastation/problems too – especially the poorest ones. The activists try to make climate change solutions a reality. However the government doesn´t really support them. Besides Greenpeace thinks that a energy revolution would help first while by going from a world powered by nuclear and fossil fuels to one running on renewable energy. Another important issue of Greenpeace is to defend our oceans, because without the global ocean there would be no life on Earth and oceans drive the natural forces, which maintain life on our planet. Almost 80 % of all the life on Earth is found in the oceans and they create over half of our oxygen. More than 40% of the oceans need to be marine reserves in order to preserve this important ecosystem. In addition industrial fishing and unsustainable aquaculture has to be reduced. But above all the pollution of the oceans, for example caused by oil tanker accidents, has to be stopped.

Their Mission

• non-violent independently, internationally
People of the most different skin colour, from the most different countries, cultures and religions, with different political convictions join in a fight free of power for a common aim: for ours and future generations to preserve our earth and her ability, to carry varied life and to receive.

• Live
Greenpeace recognises and underlines that all life forms depend of each other and have a claim to clean air, clean grounds and clean water. Greenpeace pays attention to the dissimilitude of the life forms on our planet and the untouchability of her hereditary factors.

• Hope
Greenpeace warns the public, introduces solutions and encourages to hope with creative and effective means which wants to inspire and motivate.

• World Wide
Greenpeace is a world-comprehensive movement and searches world-comprehensive solutions.

• To act in one’s own person
Greenpeace is persuaded that every single person can contribute to the change of the world. Greenpeace recognises the responsibility of the single people who is based on this conviction and supports the human fundamental right to strive, to change his life, the society and own culture in a manner which leads to a better future.
Frage von Susi47 | am 22.11.2016 - 19:12


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 22.11.2016 - 20:22
Warum sollen wir einen Text, den Du aus 3 Webseiten 1:1 zusammenkopiert hast, korrigieren

Hello and welcome to my presentation about Greenpeace.

Greenpeace is an independent organisation that uses non-violent, creative confrontation to expose global environmental problems, and they force solutions for a green and peaceful future.
Greenpeace`s goal is to ensure the ability of the Earth to nurture life in all its diversity. => http://www.greenpeace.org/

Greenpeace was founded in Vancouver in 1972. The head office is in Amsterdam. The worldwide presence of Greenpeace is huge. They have national and regional offices in over 40 countries. In Germany 4500 people engage with Greenpeace, and that`s voluntarily. Her e you can see a map where Greenpeace is active in Germany ( https://www.greenpeace.de/gruppen/uebersicht ). Greenpeace does not accept funding from governments, corporations or political parties, relying on individual supporters. They receive money from international supporters and charitable foundations . Das ist der einzige Absatz, denn Du wohl selber erstellt hast

At the moment, the focus of Greenpeace turns to tackling human-induced climate change, preserving the oceans and supporting peace concerning Nuclear Disarment. The climate change has been a priority issue of Greenpeace for quite a long time. The supporters of Greenpeace try to promote to people what crisis could happen and how everybody can struggle against it (For example protest in order to shame government). Moreover, climate change has the potential to wipe out most of the gains, which the environment has made and the disruption of ecosystems will harm everything, accordingly, people will get devastation/problems too – especially the poorest ones. The activists try to make climate change solutions a reality. However the government doesn´t really support them. Besides Greenpeace thinks that a energy revolution would help first while by going from a world powered by nuclear and fossil fuels to one running on renewable energy. Another important issue of Greenpeace is to defend our oceans, because without the global ocean there would be no life on Earth and oceans drive the natural forces, which maintain life on our planet. Almost 80 % of all the life on Earth is found in the oceans and they create over half of our oxygen. More than 40% of the oceans need to be marine reserves in order to preserve this important ecosystem. In addition industrial fishing and unsustainable aquaculture has to be reduced. But above all the pollution of the oceans, for example caused by oil tanker accidents, has to be stopped. => http://www.myreferat.de/englisch/greenpeace/

Their Mission
• non-violent independently, internationally
People of the most different skin colour, from the most different countries, cultures and religions, with different political convictions join in a fight free of power for a common aim: for ours and future generations to preserve our earth and her ability, to carry varied life and to receive.
• Live
Greenpeace recognises and underlines that all life forms depend of each other and have a claim to clean air, clean grounds and clean water. Greenpeace pays attention to the dissimilitude of the life forms on our planet and the untouchability of her hereditary factors.
• Hope
Greenpeace warns the public, introduces solutions and encourages to hope with creative and effective means which wants to inspire and motivate.
• World Wide
Greenpeace is a world-comprehensive movement and searches world-comprehensive solutions.
• To act in one’s own person
Greenpeace is persuaded that every single person can contribute to the change of the world. Greenpeace recognises the responsibility of the single people who is based on this conviction and supports the human fundamental right to strive, to change his life, the society and own culture in a manner which leads to a better future. => http://hausaufgabenweb.de/fremdsprachen/englisch/greenpeace/


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Antwort von matata | 22.11.2016 - 20:34
Deine Texte kommen sehr wohl an. Aber Ratgeber hat dir bereits mitgeteilt, warum sich niemand von den freiwilligen Helfern darum reisst, deine Kopien zu korrigieren...
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Antwort von Susi47 | 22.11.2016 - 20:43
Ich habe nicht alles 1:1 kopiert! Ich habe mir verschieden Referate in Google angeschaut, die Informationen dort rausgesucht und wenn mir Abschnitte vom Aufbau und der Sprache her gut gefallen hab ich diese vielleicht mal kopiert (der letzte Abschnitt ist kopiert das weiß ich auch, jedoch konnte ich viel damit anfangen, da ich mir einen Zusammenhang mit meinen Plakat vorgestellt habe. Den ersten Abschnitt habe ich wiederum alleine gemacht! ).. Trotzdem danke für eure Zeit ich weiß das zu schätzen......


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 22.11.2016 - 20:51
Um es mal klar zu stellen: der rote und grüne Absatz sind ebenfalls 1:1 kopiert! Plus dem orangenen , den Du da zugegeben hast, besteht Dein EIGENANTEIL maximal aus 10%. Ich bin immer gerne bereit zu helfen, aber wenn ich merke, dass ich verar.... werde, hört bei mir der Spaß auf. Ach ja, und ich gehe mal davon aus, dass die Kollegen im Hausaufgaben-Forum Dir auch auf die Schliche kommen. Da bin ich übrigens auch Mentor ...


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Antwort von Susi47 | 22.11.2016 - 21:08
Ja hab meinen Text tatsächlich auch auf diese Seite geschickt. Ich wollte niemanden verarschen, was bringt mir das schon? Finde es etwas schade das ich hier jz so böse dargestellt werde, wollte immerhin nur Hilfe.. auch wenn ich die mehrheit des Textes aus anderen Referaten hatte, hatte ich den Gedanken das diese vllt Fehler enthalten könnten, wenn ich gewusst hätte das hier so reagiert wird und sowas nicht gerne gesehen ist hätte ich das gleich gelassen und nur meinen selbst gestalteten Text korrigieren lassen, tut mir leid! Habe daraus gelernt und ich weiß nun was hier nicht gerne gesehen wird.. Schönen Abend noch.


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Antwort von Ratgeber | 22.11.2016 - 21:11

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