Bitte kontrollieren schreibe morgen ne englisch Klausur. :(

Suicide note. Lives you when you breathe? No! I do not live. I torture myself. I do not want to live anymore. Why should I live? Nobody loves Me. My natural father does not even make it. He left us. I live with my family, with my mother and my brother. My mother does not respect me.

In my opinion, she is overwhelmed, and lets out the anger in me. You expect a lot from me. But I have my dreams. I do not want to live according to their guidelines. And do what it purports to me. Sometimes I have the feeling that i`m her daughter but i`m not her slave. The other day they clapped (slapped) me. I will not forget (my) mother. My brother is the cunning and the best ! Always he always he. Ian ian ian? Who am I? He studied and is smart. But andrea is stupid and writes bad exams. But I do not study ,I have other goals. I want to practice drama college. Today I must be the slave of my mother to realize my dreams. And the loss is, Graham ... my friend. Or my ex -boyfriend makes fun of me today considerate and flirting with my best friend. More I would not comment. It breaks my heart. I love graham but he does not understand it, and now he is no longer with me. What can I say? My best friend is also deceived me. On these days where I cried dawn danced with graham. Dawn my old best friend what I did to you? Graham what I did to you? Mother and you? What was my fault? Father why did you left? But today I go .. I fall asleep and wake up ever again. I`m broken I do not want to fight anymore, I have no power more. I am lost. I find no meaning in life .. But I love you all. Love is not a business, because you can also love unilaterally. I thank you and forget what all HAPPENS. And you hope will be happy ... without me, and Andrea ....

Bitte lies noch einmal , der korrektur modus ging nicht uberall , cih habe einige verandert. und bitte Achtung : in englisch ist nicht wie im deutsch.. der Predikat ist nicht am ende.
In rest war es ok.