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Hallo
1.Satz: I´m going to talk about an advertisement for coca cola, which is one of the biggest brands in the world/ all over the world (=auf der ganzen Welt).
I´ve seen coke advertised everywhere, on posters and in TV spots. The advert shows a picture of santa claus smiling and holding a bottle of coke.The colors are red and white. In the centre / in the middle of the picture you can see the coke bottle in his hand. On the top it is written "Coke time". Santaclaus seems to be/ looks very happy on the picture. think   t   heaim (bitte deutlicher ausdrücken. Der Satz ist noch unvollständig) is to target children. The advert is interesting/ disigned pretty cleverly (=geschickt), it helps the company to influence and attract   children. The marketers are trying to attract young customers. They are presenting the drink as something special. I think Coca-Cola is not a healthy drink for children; it contains a lot of sugar.  

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