Slam - Nick Hornby Zusammenfassung - Korrektur/Vorschläge?

Hallo, ich schreibe eine Englischarbeit zu dem Buch "Slam".

Hierzu habe ich eine Zusammenfassung auf Englisch geschrieben und würde mich freuen wenn jemand Verbesserungsvorschläge dazu hätte.

Das ist TEIL 1 da ich nur 10000Zeichen frei habe.

Sam Jones is a 15 year old skater from London which was modeled on Tony Hawk. For this reason
  He also owns a Tony Hawk poster and of course also has all his books read. a peculiarity
  Sam is he talks to his poster , and this to him in the form of quotations from the books
"Answers " . Sam grades are rather mediocre . But he has talent and interest in
  Media design .
  He lives alone with his mother Angela Jones. She is only 32 years old and got Sam at the age of 16
  Years. Is invited as Sam`s mother to a birthday party , she wants that Sam
  accompanied as it wants to introduce the daughter of the hostess . On the birthday of Sam learns then
  Alicia Jones know , Alicia is very pretty effect on Sam but initially very arrogant. Sam and Alicia
  talk to each other and still arrange to meet for a next . Alicia also told him
  Is this your biggest dream would be to become a model and she left her last boyfriend recently
  because he had urged them to sleep with her .
  Alicia and Sam are a couple and also sleep in one of the first dates with each other,
  Sam is only unsafe , but when Alicia then begins to cry he agrees with her
  . sleep
  You spend a lot of time until they live together slowly apart and start from
  " bored " to be different . Sam is also of the opinion that he too for his relationship
  Friends Rabbit (but good skating is pretty stupid) and Rubbish ( skating awful , so
  the name " Rubbish " is but a good friend with whom Sam about his problems
  can talk ) and neglected his mother. Besides, he had little time to skate to .
  Although Alicia and Sam are separated Sam still has an uneasy feeling as they once
  had unprotected sex and he fears that that could have consequences.
  Meanwhile, everything had replayed and Sam went skating again and lived his old
  Life .
  Due to this, Sam was with Alicia together he seems interesting for other girls
  to have become , which previously would not have considered it. So he has with Nicki Niedzwicki
  a date. From her but does not last very much , leaving it with this one meeting.
  At Sam`s 16th birthday, he receives a sms from Alicia with the content they talk him urgently
  would . They meet at Starbucks and Alicia Sam explains that they suspected to be pregnant . about
  make sure she wants to buy a pregnancy test. However, arrived in the supermarket
  on the shelf with the pregnancy test two drops to which they have too little money there. Alicia
  then runs home to quickly get money and Sam should wait at the supermarket.
  When Alicia `s gone get Sam panics and goes home and turns on his mobile phone. in his
  Room he speaks to his Tony Hawk Posters and by this for the first time in the future
  was added. He wakes in the morning because a baby is crying and when he opens his eyes he is in Alicia
  Rooms in a large bed in which it lies . At the foot of the bed is a baby in the cradle
  the crying baby is . Sam is totally awkward and do not know what to do and how he
  to react. He can only conclude that he is reunited with Alicia, a baby name
" Roof" ( he knows so far only the baby`s nickname and is very surprised by this
  has strange name ) and he also lives at home with Alicia.
  He arrives at this day in the future in McDonalds , a young mother who greets him and shows
  how to change a diaper. Of course he knows but does not like the girl`s name is or where he
  should know. He also learns that his mother is pregnant again .
  When he is back in the present, he feels the day in the future as so terrible that he
  panic flees to Hastings and his cell phone thrown into the sea. Once there, he wants a job
  looking for, there`s something going on in the little harbor town but in need of fishing and possible
  Employer is not an employee , it even laugh when he asks for jobs. Disappointed by the
  success without a job he goes into a very abgewracktes bed & breakfast , because he thinks he can
  this most likely afford . When he opens the door before he notes that it smells very fishy ,
  but is nevertheless the stairs to the empty desk high and rings. He waits a while, but
  it seems no one . Then an old very knauziger and unfriendly man comes to the
  Reception, he treated very harshly and Sam tells him to help the stairs to the front door
  to go down , Sam is reluctant but only after the man tells him that his daughter to him
  was supposed to help but would be cut down, helps Sam . While Sam slowly with the man`s
  Stairs going down , it complains further around. Having arrived at the doorstep of the bed & breakfast
  expected the man of Sam that he is there waiting for him until he comes back. Sam
  negates the first , but the old man offers him money for 20 pounds just as much as a room
  would cost per night . Thus, Sam gets his first job . While the old man, which Mr.
  Brady is, is gone, Sam goes back to the front desk where he the owner, the more fishy
  stinks encounters . This will only give him no room because he thinks it would be one for his girlfriend
  and want to get , so they could have sex there undisturbed . When he but about which informs it
  works for old Mr. Brady , in which the bed & breakfast owner has apparently angst,
  they are given a room . Sam helps Mr. Brady back to his room and then goes into his own .
  Sam fell asleep in the middle of the night and there was a loud knock at the door and Mr. Brady should he shouted to him
  help the TV operation from under his bed to pick up, as it was just dropped him.
  When Sam he bends down fear that the worst things that could be under the bed
  and he realizes that nothing is worse thus to live on and he did not before his
  Can run away responsibility. In the end, only one sock and television service was under
  the bed , but Sam had decided to go back . ( >> Lt . Teachers master key scene !)
  When Sam is back in his street , he can already see that a police stands in front of his house and annoyed
  to have himself thinking about his stupidity his mother would not do anything . he goes
  to the house and found his distraught mother and a policewoman in the living room . the policewoman
  as well as Sam`s mother want to know where he had been. Sam told where he was, but not the
  real reason why. He put everything on the separation of parents and school problems . Sams
  Mother was just very surprised , because she was long separated from Sam`s father and Sam never
  Had a problem with it , but then suggested a family to begin therapy.
  Sam`s mother and his father and Sam visit then a family therapy. Very unsuccessful because
  Sam`s dad constantly be xenophobic to the Spanish therapist behaves and
  Sam does not say much . Sam`s dad believed that something else behind it. At that time he knew
  but not how right he was .
  Sam supplanted what had happened but on the 3rd day of his return , the bell rang at the door and Alicia
  was before it. When she sees Sam begins to cry. He invites them in and they told him that they
  is really pregnant .
  Alicia wants Sam together this evening goes to her parents with her and this
  told , but Sam is looking for a excuse and they arrange to meet the next day. Alicia took Sam
  off at the school and they go to Alicia. Her parents, Robert & Andrea Burns, Sam never liked
  too much. You think he would have a bad influence on her daughter they think
  Alicia would be very talented and smart while Sam would rather ordinary . Alicia`s father is
  A college professor and her mother is a city councilor . Both very worried about their reputation .
  When Sam and Alicia tell Alicia is pregnant , the parents get upset very much. the mother
  begins to cry and she put the blame on Sam and believe he would life
  destroy her daughter. Alicia`s parents also want to encourage abortion , but what they
  strictly rejects . Robert and Andrea decide immediately set out for Sam`s mother and of the
  Pregnancy to tell. Sam is not thrilled comes to Alicia`s parents but not
  to .
  All 4 go to Sam home and even in between the door bursts Alicia`s dad with the news
  about the pregnancy of his daughter out , regardless of Sam or his mother. Sams
  Mother starts to cry and could not understand how such a thing to happen since you are so self
  had happened and she had Sam warned often enough.
  During pregnancy, Alicia screwed up to high school what their parents solely on the
  Push pregnancy and Sam and Alicia come together after an ultrasound image
  seen from the baby together again . They also visit a
  Childbirth class , first unsuccessfully that they went to a course date with adults
  and there do not feel comfortable . Later they will attend a course for young people who
  Pregnant , in part . There he meets the girl of his first vision of the future again
  which had shown him how to change diapers in McDonalds .