Simple Past und Past progressive

Opps Er soll natürlich nur einmal voranden sein

Last week Ded Decker from Arizona survived often a snake bite him his leg.  That was having a party with somr friends and they were having a great time. 
He was just eating a steak when he heard a scream. 
) Hilery that`sgirlfriend was shouting. " Ded`s, there isdneak (?) to the left!" 
Ded didn`t know what to do. He was and alive the but now exactly could he get the snake.
All friends were watching him when the snake came up to Ded`s left me. 
Ded was screaming has came and Hilery on couldll his leg. 
So he snake tail and pulled. The snake appeared and Hilery said, " We need an ambulance or a helicopter for Ded."
Some minutes later to paramedicd arrived and gave Ded emercency first aid. 
The next day there was a big headline in the looking newspaper. Ded was famous.

rot= simple past
grün= past progressive

korrigiert habe ich den Text nicht, denn er man kann nur erahnen, was er sagen soll. das habe ich schon am 30.11. gedacht, als Du den Beitrag zum ersten Mal gepostet hast (http://www.e-hausaufgaben.de/Thema-200514-Ist-alkes-richtig.php).Dazu müsste man mal die deutschen Gedanken kennen, um daraus eine vernünftige Übersetzung zu basteln...