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introduction: It probably is the UK’sbiggest and most contentious balance sheet – the cost and benefit analysis ofmembership of the European Union.
A rguments have raged about the assets and drawbacks of being in the EU sincethe day Britain joined in 1973. There are even voices asserting that thecountry isn’t even part in the EU by now due to not having the Euro as currencyor the like. In the following it will be shown why the UK should stay in theEuropean Union.  
main body: For one thing the EU is the UK’smain trading partner with approximately 50% of the British total trade. Only bymeans of this market Britain became a location of investment and also had agrowth of trade and industry. By not being a member of the EU, the UK wouldlose lots of beneficial trade deals such as not paying customs duties. By thepoorer economic situation lots of jobs will be lost and could cause emigrationto other European countries. Another point is that a lot ofinfluence would be lost by leaking from the EU. Stripped of influence in forexample Brussels, Britain would find itself increasingly ignored by Washington andsidelined on big transnational issues such as the environment and the security,also because America and other allies want the UK to stay in the EuropeanUnion.  
conclusion: In conclusion you can see thatthe advantages in trade and transnational influence overweigh the disadvantages,which are for instance immigration. In my point of view the UK should remain inthe EU and put its power to a greater extent in reforming the union. You alsoshould keep in mind that the UK has a special position in the EU like alreadymentioned in the beginning and is not similar to all the other Europeancountries. Normal 0 21 false false false DE X-NONE X-NONE