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Könntet ihr bitte meine Fehler verbessern.. Danke im voraus


Day four in Hungary was beginning with a breakfast in the hunting lodge at 7.30. The most of us come to late to the breakfast because sometimes we went to late to sleep. The important point for this day was that we had some sport activities but the class was not motivated. We drove with the Bus to the Hunyadi Janos secondary school. The students from the secondary school had a special program for this day. They had built up different stations for us with cleverness games. For example: gates shoot, capture pins and a quiz. We were classified together with the Hungarian students in small groups. As a result we got to know us better. Most of the time we talked in German and English because the Hungarian students learn as a foreign language German. After the play was the best group with the most number of points selected and got a pie. Shortly after the draw there was a football game between German and Hungarian students, the German students had win. Then there was lunch at school. It was 2 a.m. then continues with the Nordic walking. Before we walking a professional teacher told us as we cope with the sticks. We started with walking was only a very short distance we have gone to the lake. The lake was very nice to see but you should not swim there because it was to dangerous but one of us break the rules and went into the water our teacher Mrs Sedeqi was not excited about the situation. At the lake, we had free time for, and then it continued with a karate and archery show. We had also the chance for archery it was very interesting because most of us had never archery before. Also Zumba dancing was on the plan, but the teacher did not come. Shortly before the end of the day we had again free time and then we had the dinner at the lake. We sat all together on the grass and talked. We had a dinner on the lake at 6 p.m it was very tasty because it was grilled. After dinner we spent time with the Hungarian students at the lake because our teacher talked with Hungarian teachers. We said goodbye and went back with our bus back in the hunting lodge where we spend the most of time together on our terrace. It was a very nice day.
Frage von aksaray68 | am 08.10.2012 - 20:10


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Antwort von goldenoldie (ehem. Mitglied) | 09.10.2012 - 14:35
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Day four in Hungary was beginning(t) with a breakfast in the hunting lodge at 7.30. The(d) most of us come (t)
to(w) late to the breakfast because sometimes(w) we
went(t) to(w) late to sleep(wo). The important point for this day was that we had some sport activities but the class was not motivated. We drove with (w) the d Bus(sp) to the(d) Hunyadi Janos secondary school. The students from the secondary school had a special program for this day. They had built up different stations for us with cleverness games. For example: gates
shoot (?),
capture pins (?) and a quiz. We were classified (w) together with the Hungarian students in (w) small groups. As a result we got to know us better. Most of the time we talked in German and English because the Hungarian students learn as a foreign language German. After the play was the best group with the most number of points selected and got a pie. Shortly after the draw there was a football game between German and Hungarian students, the German students had win. Then there was lunch at school. It was 2 a.m. then continues with the Nordic walking. Before we walking a professional teacher told us as we cope with the sticks. We started with walking was only a very short distance we have gone to the lake. The lake was very nice to see but you should not swim there because it was to dangerous but one of us break the rules and went into the water our teacher Mrs Sedeqi was not excited about the situation. At the lake, we had free time for, and then it continued with a karate and archery show. We had also the chance for archery it was very interesting because most of us had never archery before. Also Zumba dancing was on the plan, but the teacher did not come. Shortly before the end of the day we had again free time and then we had the dinner at the lake. We sat all together on the grass and talked. We had a dinner on the lake at 6 p.m it was very tasty because it was grilled. After dinner we spent time with the Hungarian students at the lake because our teacher talked with Hungarian teachers. We said goodbye and went back with our bus back in the hunting lodge where we spend the most of time together on our terrace. It was a very nice day.


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w = Wortfehler // sp = Rechtscheibfehler //
wo = Satzstellungsfehler // ? = was soll das denn heißen? //
d = weglassen // t = Grammatik: Zeitfehler

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