ich bitte um Verbesserung (Englisch)

Zitat:
Yesterday,on 24th June 2001, R.

Cook, the British Secratary gave a speech about advatantages of immigration in Britian.
In the parliamenent he has told us some interesting facts.
At first Cook said, British are a ethnic composition of different races and communities.we got to know that most people from british island are not indeginous.The pluaralism has a great influence on british lifestyle.also he said, incomers are welcome in britian because they contriubute to british growth and porsperity.Also pluralism plays a big role for cultural and economic vitality of british. Britians aren´t only open for influences,they adapt these,too. some festivals and dishes are typicial british today.
He said,young people like to been educated in a multi-ethnic environment.we think R.Cook is right in all these facts. In Britian we can find an perfect ethnic composition and so indeginous and immigrants learn from each other.
Our opinion is,that foreigner shouldn´t be driven out beacause they contribute to british lifestyle or economy.britian is more hospitable to immigrants than other european countries.it is easier to get a job there and the life is better too.but we think, it have to give conditions for immigrates.
they should speak english or learn it

Zitat:
Yesterday(1),on 24th June 2001, R. Cook, the British Secretary gave a speech about advantages of immigration in Britain.
In (2) Parliament he told us some interesting facts.
At first Cook said, British were an ethnic composition of different races and communities.We got to know that most people from the British Island were not indigenous.(2)Pluralism had a great influence on the (3) British lifestyle. He also (4) said, incomers were welcome in Britian because they contributed to British growth and prosperity. Pluralism also played a big role for the (3)cultural and economic vitality of Britain. The Britains were not only open for influences, they adapted these,too. Some festivals and meals are typicial British today.
He said, young people liked to be educated in a multi-ethnic environment.
We think R.Cook is right with all these facts. In Britain we can find a perfect ethnic composition and so local residents and immigrants learn from each other.
Our opinion is (5)that foreigners shouldn´t be driven out because they contribute to the British lifestyle or economy. Britain is more hospitable to immigrants than other European countries. It is easier to get a job there and (2) life is better, (6) too. But we think, there have to be (7)conditions for immigrants, too: They should speak or learn English.