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Todd Anderson
Todd is a very shy and quiet boy.
In school lessons nobody could get a word out of him. At the beginning of the book he isn’t self-confident, but he becomes more and more accepted. Mr. Keating has given Todd a new sense of life. In his family he is also an outsider, because his parents prefer his brother. His best friend is Neil, his roommate. Neil demands Todd, so he comes out of himself. Because of Neil’s suicide, Todd runs out of the school and cries. Through this action you can see, that Todd can be a sensitive boy. Todd is a main character in the ‘Dead Poets Society” and he is 16 years old.

Jeffrey Anderson
He is the brother of Todd and was the best of year. The parents of Jeffrey and Todd prefer Jeffrey, because of his good conclusion.

Mr. Anderson and Mrs. Anderson
•parents of Todd and Jeffrey
•not much interested in Todd

Neil Perry
Neil is an open boy, who has got many friends. At the beginning of the story he is very happy and funny, but his father is very strict and forbids him to act. Against his father’s will, he began acting and got the lead of ‘A Midsummer Night’s Dream’. For this he even faked the consent of his father and of Mr. Nolan. Mr. Keating is his ‘second father’ in that time and understands him. When his father saw, that Neil acted, he packed his things and wanted to send him to a military school. Because of that he commits suicide. He was an intelligent boy and was excellent at school.

Mr. Perry
He is a very strict father, the father of Neil. He forbids Neil to playing.

Mrs. Perry
•mother of Neil
•set great store by education

Knox Overstreet
Knox is 16 years old and when he had a meeting at Danburry’s, he fell in love with Chris. To win her heart, he wants to write a poem for her and read it out in front of her class. In the end of it, he wins her heart. He has short hair with curls and an athletic build.

Mr. Overstreet and Mrs. Overstreet
•parents of Knox
•not that rich, but proud of their son and very cordially

Steven Meeks
A 16-years-old boy. He is a genius and really helpful and a right-hander.

Richard Cameron
In the group he is a follower. He is the one, who sneaks Mr. Nolan of the club ‘Dead Poets Society’ and of the ‘funny’ teaching lessons of Mr. Keating. This way he becomes unpopular with the others. He can be called a ‘Crawford’ and an ‘egoist’. Like the other boys he is 16 years old.

Mr. Cameron
•proud father of Richard Cameron

Pitts
This boy is the best friend of Meeks. At school he is an average student and isn’t noticeable. His doing hasn’t any impact of the plot.

Charlie Dalton
Is a student, who doesn’t see the reality. He has got his own ‘dream world’ and such strange aims like to have as many girls as possible. In this situation you can see, that he is a childish boy. Later he wants to be called ‘Nuwanda’ and plays the saxophone. He can be called ‘the poem writer’. In the theatre evening he fall in love with Virginia Danburry.

Mrs. Dalton
•mother of Charlie
•a cordially mother

Mr. Gale Nolan
He is the headmaster of Welton Academy. Particularly he puts much use of the four pillars at Welton: ‘traditon’, ‘honour’, ‘discipline’ and ‘excellence’. So he is very tradition-conscious. Nolan is about 60 years old. Many years ago he was an English teacher.

Mrs. Nolan
She is the wife of Mr. Nolan and work as a secretary.

Mr. John Keating
Mr. Keating is the new English teacher at Welton, with an extraordinary teaching. He was also a student at this school before, and the co-founder of the ‘Dead Poets Society’. The students call him ‘Captain’. But because of Neil’s suicide he dismissed from school. Mr. Keating is about 30 years old, understanding, helpfully, a little bit crazy and emotionful. His hair is brunette, his eyes are brown and he is medium-sized. In the past he was a ‘Rhodes scholar’.

Mr. Portius
•English teacher in retirement

George McAllister
•thick Latin teacher at Welton with a Scottish accent

Chemistry teacher
•wear glasses
•is strict

Dr. Hager
•old teacher at Welton
•teaches maths

Games teacher
•demand students very much

George Hopkins
•student at Welton

Hastings
•student at Welton

Harrison
•student at Welton

Richard Watson
•student at Welton

Johnson
•student at Welton

Henry David Thoreau
•(former) member of the ‘Dead Poets Society’

Joe Danburry
He is a good friend of Knox‘ father. Knox goes to dinner to him and his family. He live with his family in a white country house and is about 40 years old.

Janette Danburry
She is the wife of Joe and welcomes Knox friendly.

Virginia Danburry
The daughter of Joe and Janette is 15 years old. Her parents command her. Her nickname is ‘Ginny’ and in the ‘Midsummer Night’s Dream’ she plays ‘Hermia’.

Chet Danburry
Chet is the son of Joe and Janette. He is the boyfriend of Chris and a football player in the football team of Ridgeway High School. His build is very athletic and he is very tall.

Chris Noel
She is the girlfriend of Chet and has got a sporty figure. She gets a poem from Knox. At the end of the story she has got a new boyfriend: Knox Overstreet.

Mrs. Noel
•mother of Chris

Mrs. Marks
•aunt of Virginia

Steve
•plays football
•drink alcohol at the party in the house of the Danburry’s

Bubba
•athlete
•drink alcohol at the party in the house of the Danburry’s

Patsy
•boy at the party in the house of the Danburry’s

Rob Cranes
•editor of the school paper ‘Welton Honors’

Jessica
•girlfriend of Mr. Keating
•25 years old

Theater director
•40 years-old woman with blond hair

Lysander
•boy in the play ‘A Midsummer Night’s Dream’

Gloria
•20 years-old girl (of Charlie)
•blond hair

Tina
•20 years-old girl (of Charlie)
•dark hair and green eyes

Mr. Alexander Carmichael jr.
He is the oldest graduate of the Welton-Academy. He does in the year 1886 his conclusion and is now 80 years old.
GAST stellte diese Frage am 13.12.2010 - 16:36


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Antwort von Senkura (ehem. Mitglied) | 13.12.2010 - 19:33
Todd Anderson
Todd is a very shy and quiet boy. In school lessons, nobody could get a word out of him. At the beginning of the book,
he isn`t self-confident, but he becomes more and more accepted. Mr. Keating has given Todd a new sense of life. In his family, he is also an outsider, because his parents prefer his brother. His best friend is Neil, who is also his roommate. Neil demands Todd, so he comes out of himself. Due to Neils suicide, Todd runs out of the school and cries. Through this action, it`s noticeable, that Todd can be a sensitive boy. Todd is a main character in the ‘Dead Poets Society” and he is 16 years old.

Jeffrey Anderson
He is the brother of Todd and was the "class winner?". The parents of Jeffrey and Todd prefer Jeffrey, because of his good conclusion.

Mr. Anderson and Mrs. Anderson
•parents of Todd and Jeffrey
•not really interested in Todd

Neil Perry
Neil is an open-minded boy, who has got many friends. At the beginning of the story, he is very happy and funny, but his father is very strict and forbids him to act. Against his fathers will, he began acting and got the lead of ‘A Midsummer Night’s Dream’. For this he even faked the consent of his father and of Mr. Nolan. Mr. Keating is his "second father" in that time and understands him. When his father saw, that Neil acted, he packed his stuffs and wanted to send him to a military school. That`s the reason, he committed suicide. He was an intelligent boy and was excellent at school.

Mr. Perry
He is a very strict father, the father of Neil. He forbids Neil to play.

Mrs. Perry
•mother of Neil
•set great store by education "Bedeutung?"

Knox Overstreet
Knox is 16 years old. When he had a meeting at Danburry’s, he fell in love with Chris. To win her heart, he wanted to write a poem for her and read it out in front of her class. In the end of it, he won her heart. He had short hair with curls and an athletic build.

Mr. Overstreet and Mrs. Overstreet
•parents of Knox
•not that rich, but proud of their son and very cordially

Steven Meeks
A 16-years-old boy. He is a genius and really helpful and a right-hander.

Richard Cameron
In the group, he is a follower. He is the one, who sneaks Mr. Nolan of the club ‘Dead Poets Society’ and of the ‘funny’ teaching lessons of Mr. Keating. That`s why he`s getting disliked by the others. He`s called a ‘Crawford’ and an ‘egoist’. He`s also 16 years old.

Mr. Cameron
•proud father of Richard Cameron

Pitts
This boy is the best friend of Meeks. At school, he is an average student and isn’t conspicuous. His "actions" does not have any impact of the plot.

Charlie Dalton
Is a student, who doesn’t see the reality. He has got his own ‘dream world’ and such strange aims like, having as many girls as possible. In this situation, you can see, that he is an immature boy. Later on, he wants to be called ‘Nuwanda’ and plays the saxophone. He can be called ‘the poem writer’. In the theatre evening, he falls in love with Virginia Danburry.

Mrs. Dalton
•mother of Charlie
•a cordially mother

Mr. Gale Nolan
He is the headmaster of Welton Academy. Particularly he puts much use of the four pillars at Welton: ‘traditon’, ‘honour’, ‘discipline’ and ‘excellence’, so he is very tradition-conscious. Nolan is about 60 years old. Many years ago he used to be an English teacher.

Mrs. Nolan
She is the wife of Mr. Nolan and works as a secretary.

Mr. John Keating
Mr. Keating is the new English teacher at Welton, with an extraordinary teaching. He was also a student at this school before, and the co-founder of the ‘Dead Poets Society’. The students call him ‘Captain’, but because of Neil’s suicide, he was dismissed from school. Mr. Keating is about 30 years old, understanding, helpfully, a little bit crazy and emotional. His hair is brunette, his eyes are brown and he is medium-sized. In the past he was a ‘Rhodes scholar’.

 
Antwort von GAST | 13.12.2010 - 18:15
Bitte helft mir. Brauche das bis spätestens Morgen in der Schule.

Bitte bitte bitte

 
Antwort von GAST | 13.12.2010 - 18:19
Und das fällt dir heute Abend ein, dass du diesen 4 DINA4-Seiten-Text bis morgen brauchst? Und dann noch puschen! Wir arbeiten hier freiwillig und nicht unter Zwang.

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Antwort von matata | 13.12.2010 - 18:21
Dann kannst du betteln so lange du willst.
- Der Text ist zu lang!
- was war die Aufgabe? Was waren die Fragen?
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Antwort von GAST | 13.12.2010 - 18:24
die aufgabe: alle charaktere, die in dem buch `dead poets society` vorkommen charakterisieren.

es müsste doch auch nur mal ein kurzes drüber lesen sein, damit die gravierensten fehler wenigstens raus sind


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Antwort von Senkura (ehem. Mitglied) | 13.12.2010 - 19:33
Todd Anderson
Todd is a very shy and quiet boy. In school lessons, nobody could get a word out of him. At the beginning of the book,
he isn`t self-confident, but he becomes more and more accepted. Mr. Keating has given Todd a new sense of life. In his family, he is also an outsider, because his parents prefer his brother. His best friend is Neil, who is also his roommate. Neil demands Todd, so he comes out of himself. Due to Neils suicide, Todd runs out of the school and cries. Through this action, it`s noticeable, that Todd can be a sensitive boy. Todd is a main character in the ‘Dead Poets Society” and he is 16 years old.

Jeffrey Anderson
He is the brother of Todd and was the "class winner?". The parents of Jeffrey and Todd prefer Jeffrey, because of his good conclusion.

Mr. Anderson and Mrs. Anderson
•parents of Todd and Jeffrey
•not really interested in Todd

Neil Perry
Neil is an open-minded boy, who has got many friends. At the beginning of the story, he is very happy and funny, but his father is very strict and forbids him to act. Against his fathers will, he began acting and got the lead of ‘A Midsummer Night’s Dream’. For this he even faked the consent of his father and of Mr. Nolan. Mr. Keating is his "second father" in that time and understands him. When his father saw, that Neil acted, he packed his stuffs and wanted to send him to a military school. That`s the reason, he committed suicide. He was an intelligent boy and was excellent at school.

Mr. Perry
He is a very strict father, the father of Neil. He forbids Neil to play.

Mrs. Perry
•mother of Neil
•set great store by education "Bedeutung?"

Knox Overstreet
Knox is 16 years old. When he had a meeting at Danburry’s, he fell in love with Chris. To win her heart, he wanted to write a poem for her and read it out in front of her class. In the end of it, he won her heart. He had short hair with curls and an athletic build.

Mr. Overstreet and Mrs. Overstreet
•parents of Knox
•not that rich, but proud of their son and very cordially

Steven Meeks
A 16-years-old boy. He is a genius and really helpful and a right-hander.

Richard Cameron
In the group, he is a follower. He is the one, who sneaks Mr. Nolan of the club ‘Dead Poets Society’ and of the ‘funny’ teaching lessons of Mr. Keating. That`s why he`s getting disliked by the others. He`s called a ‘Crawford’ and an ‘egoist’. He`s also 16 years old.

Mr. Cameron
•proud father of Richard Cameron

Pitts
This boy is the best friend of Meeks. At school, he is an average student and isn’t conspicuous. His "actions" does not have any impact of the plot.

Charlie Dalton
Is a student, who doesn’t see the reality. He has got his own ‘dream world’ and such strange aims like, having as many girls as possible. In this situation, you can see, that he is an immature boy. Later on, he wants to be called ‘Nuwanda’ and plays the saxophone. He can be called ‘the poem writer’. In the theatre evening, he falls in love with Virginia Danburry.

Mrs. Dalton
•mother of Charlie
•a cordially mother

Mr. Gale Nolan
He is the headmaster of Welton Academy. Particularly he puts much use of the four pillars at Welton: ‘traditon’, ‘honour’, ‘discipline’ and ‘excellence’, so he is very tradition-conscious. Nolan is about 60 years old. Many years ago he used to be an English teacher.

Mrs. Nolan
She is the wife of Mr. Nolan and works as a secretary.

Mr. John Keating
Mr. Keating is the new English teacher at Welton, with an extraordinary teaching. He was also a student at this school before, and the co-founder of the ‘Dead Poets Society’. The students call him ‘Captain’, but because of Neil’s suicide, he was dismissed from school. Mr. Keating is about 30 years old, understanding, helpfully, a little bit crazy and emotional. His hair is brunette, his eyes are brown and he is medium-sized. In the past he was a ‘Rhodes scholar’.

 
Antwort von GAST | 13.12.2010 - 19:34
oh vielen vielen dank


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Antwort von Senkura (ehem. Mitglied) | 13.12.2010 - 19:39
Joe Danburry
He is a good friend of Knox‘s father. Knox eats dinner with him and his family. He lives with his family in a white country house and is about 40 years old.

Janette Danburry
She is the wife of Joe and welcomes Knox friendly.

Virginia Danburry
The daughter of Joe and Janette is 15 years old. Her parents command her. Her nickname is ‘Ginny’ and in the ‘Midsummer Night’s Dream’ she plays ‘Hermia’.

Chet Danburry
Chet is the son of Joe and Janette. He is the boyfriend of Chris and a football player, in the football team of Ridgeway High School. His build is very athletic and he is very tall.

Chris Noel
She is the girlfriend of Chet and has got a sporty figure. She gets a poem from Knox. At the end of the story she has got a new boyfriend: Knox Overstreet.

Mrs. Noel
•mother of Chris

Mrs. Marks
•aunt of Virginia

Steve
•plays football
•drinks alcohol at the party, which is in the house of the Danburry’s

Bubba
athletic
•drinks alcohol at the party in the house of the Danburry’s

Patsy
•Is a boy at the same party

Rob Cranes
•editor of the school paper ‘Welton Honors’

Jessica
•girlfriend of Mr. Keating
•25 years old

Theater director
•40 years old woman with blond hair

Lysander
•boy in the play ‘A Midsummer Night’s Dream’

Gloria
•20 years old girl (of Charlie)
•blond hair

Tina
•20 years-old girl (of Charlie)
•dark hair and green eyes

Mr. Alexander Carmichael jr.
He is the oldest graduate of the Welton-Academy. He did his conclusion in the year of 1886 and is currently 80 years old.


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Antwort von Senkura (ehem. Mitglied) | 13.12.2010 - 19:49
War nicht sehr viel zu verbessern. Hat mir gut gefallen ;)

 
Antwort von GAST | 13.12.2010 - 19:51
noch einmal ein sehr großes dankeschön

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