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Frage: Kann das bitte jemand korrigieren?
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Hallo. Könntet ihr bitte den folgenden text korrigieren? (Ich weis mein Englisch ist nicht das Beste)



Charlie: So, I think we start with some vocabularies.
Meeks: Oh yes, that’s a good idea. Some funny ones?
Knox: You loves all about Latin, or?
Meeks: Ha, ha.ha…. Let’s start! I say the words in Latin and you have to translate the vocabularies. Radiare
Neil?
Neil ( lackadaisical): What have you said ?
Meeks: We want to learn Latin, not dreaming !
Neil: Lasst mich doch in Ruhe!
Neil stand up and run with a angry face out of the room.
In his bed, he was wailing.
“ I hate him. I’m a own person, I can do what I want.
You work on the school annual NEXT year, you study medicin, you must, you must….
Nothing I were do. It’s my life. I can not understand, that a father is so strong and prevail.
Without a reason, because I have in every case mark one. It’s not fair.
Mother, what have you do? What men have you marry ? It was the biggest mistace in your life! His determination has a end !
I phone to him and say ,what I think: I work by the school annual and I were not study medicin. Bye.
But, I know the result: Changing school. Welcome at the military school. Welcome in the hell. Everything is better than this school. Here at Welton I have my friends and the teachers are o.k.
Oh no, I have to excuse me by the others.
The door is going of, Todd come in the room.
Todd: All right ?
Neil: Yes, sorry, but …..
Todd: No problem. Everyone has a bad day. I know your feelings, because your father….
Neil: Change the theme. Do you learn something by Meeks ?
Todd: Yes, he is a good teacher and a funny boy.
Neil: Do you want to hear some stories about him ?
Todd: Yes, let’s start!


Das wars. Vielen Dank.
Frage von lieschene (ehem. Mitglied) | am 03.12.2010 - 14:02


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Antwort von ..Jule.. (ehem. Mitglied) | 03.12.2010 - 20:57
Charlie: So, I think we start with some vocabulary.
Meeks: Oh yes, that’s a good idea.
Some funny ones?
Knox: You loves all about Latin, don`t you?
Meeks: Ha, ha.ha…. Let’s start! I say the words in Latin and you have to translate the vocabulary. Radiare
Neil?
Neil ( lackadaisical): What did you say ?
Meeks: We want to learn Latin, stop dreaming !
Neil: Leave me alone!
Neil stands up and runs out of the room with angry expression .
In his bed, he was wailing.
“ I hate him. I’m a own person, I can do what I want.
You work at school annual NEXT year, you study medicine, you must, you must….
Nothing I were do (?). It’s my life. I can not understand, how a father can be so strong and prevail.
Without a reason. I have mark one in every case. It’s not fair.
Mother, what have you done? What man did you marry ? It was the biggest mistake you have ever done in your life! His determination has an end !
I will call and tell him ,what I think: I work at the school annual and I won`t study medicine. Bye.
But, I know the result: Changing school. Welcome at the military school. Welcome to hell. Everything is better than this school. I have friends here at Welton and the teachers are o.k.
Oh no, I have to excuse myself by the others.
The door opens, Todd enters the room.
Todd: All right ?
Neil: Yes, sorry, but …..
Todd: No problem. Everyone has a bad day. I know your feelings, because your father….
Neil: Change the topic. Did you learn something about Meeks ?
Todd: Yes, he is a good teacher and a funny boy.
Neil: Do you want to hear some stories about him ?
Todd: Yes, let’s start!

Ich hoff dass es dir hilft!
Liebe Grüße, Jule

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.12.2010 - 21:43
Charlie: So, I think we are going to start with some vocabulary.
Meeks: Oh yes, that’s a good idea. Some funny ones?
Knox: You love all about Latin, don`t you?
Meeks: Ha, ha.ha…. Let’s start! I say the words in Latin and you have to translate them. "Radiare"
Neil?
Neil ( lackadaisical): What did you say ?
Meeks: We want to learn Latin, stop dreaming !
Neil: Leave me alone!
(Neil stands up and runs out of the room with an angry expression) .In his bed, he was wailing.
"I hate him. I’m a person of my own , I can do what I want to..
You work at the school annual for NEXT year, you `llstudy medicine, you must, you must….
But where am I? (?). It’s my life. I can not understand, how a father can be so strict and prevailing.
Without a reason. I have received the best marks [---] in every school subject.. It’s not fair.
Mother, what have you done? What kind of man did you marry ? It was the biggest mistake you have ever done in your life! His determination has an end !
I will call him and tell him ,what I think: I am going to work at the school annual and I won`t study medicine. Bye.
But, I know the result: Changing school. Welcome at the military school. Welcome to hell. Everything is better than this school. I have friends here at Welton and the teachers are o.k.
Oh no, I have to apologize to the others.
The door opens, Todd enters the room.
Todd: All right ?
Neil: Yes, sorry, but …..
Todd: No problem. Everyone has a bad day. I know your feelings, because your father….
Neil: Change the topic. Did you learn anything about Meeks ?
Todd: Yes, he is a good teacher and a funny boy.
Neil: Do you want to hear some stories about him ?
Todd: Yes, let’s start!

Ich habe "Jules" """Korrektur""" zur Grundlage genommen:

fett = korrigiert/eingefügt; [-.--] = gestrichen


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