Kann das bitte jemand korrigieren?

Hallo. Könntet ihr bitte den folgenden text korrigieren? (Ich weis mein Englisch ist nicht das Beste)



Charlie: So, I think we start with some vocabularies.
Meeks: Oh yes, that’s a good idea. Some funny ones?
Knox: You loves all about Latin, or?
Meeks: Ha, ha.ha…. Let’s start! I say the words in Latin and you have to translate the vocabularies. Radiare
Neil?
Neil ( lackadaisical): What have you said ?
Meeks: We want to learn Latin, not dreaming !
Neil: Lasst mich doch in Ruhe!
Neil stand up and run with a angry face out of the room.
In his bed, he was wailing.
“ I hate him. I’m a own person, I can do what I want.
You work on the school annual NEXT year, you study medicin, you must, you must….
Nothing I were do. It’s my life. I can not understand, that a father is so strong and prevail.
Without a reason, because I have in every case mark one. It’s not fair.
Mother, what have you do? What men have you marry ? It was the biggest mistace in your life! His determination has a end !
I phone to him and say ,what I think: I work by the school annual and I were not study medicin. Bye.
But, I know the result: Changing school. Welcome at the military school. Welcome in the hell. Everything is better than this school. Here at Welton I have my friends and the teachers are o.k.
Oh no, I have to excuse me by the others.
The door is going of, Todd come in the room.
Todd: All right ?
Neil: Yes, sorry, but …..
Todd: No problem. Everyone has a bad day. I know your feelings, because your father….
Neil: Change the theme. Do you learn something by Meeks ?
Todd: Yes, he is a good teacher and a funny boy.
Neil: Do you want to hear some stories about him ?
Todd: Yes, let’s start!


Das wars. Vielen Dank.