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Frage: Text bitte schnell verbessern, ist richtig Wichtig !
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Es geht um ein Text, der aus einem Dialog von einem Talk Show sprächer geht und Michael jackson, wo er über seine Solo-Karriere erzählt. ( wo er noch gelebt hat ! )

( nicht wundern, ich bin sau schlecht in englisch und wir bekommen dafuer eine note und ich brauche unbedingt eine gute note.. )

M. : Welcome to Jerry Springer Show on MTV.
Today to guest, is the King of pop - Michael Jackson.
.. Hello Michael Jackson, How are you ?

M.J. : I`m fine.
M. : I am pleased, Nice that they are there.
Michael, how did your solo career ?

M.J. : My album appeared in 1979 with the title "Off the Wall," which immediately captured top of the charts. Three years later the album was released with the title "Thriller". Meanwhile, I was experimenting with new vocal layers and a new style of disco music. So he invented his own dance direction for moonwalk and robot thanks. (Video)
The video clip for the title track "Thriller" was among the most expensive productions in the music industry. The album hit all hitherto existing sales records. more than 50 million times the plate was sold.
In 1984 I was with my producer, eight Grammys for "Thriller."
The album had landed within a few days at the number one best selling records in the world. The new singles "Billie Jean" and "Beat it" were also songs with success.
But in 1989 I earned with my music 125 million U.S. dollars.
"Dangerous" in 1992 was a worldwide success with over 30 million records sold. Since the early 1990s I took me on my private estate "Neverland back.

M. : where they just talk about the Neverland Ranch ..
The Neverland Ranch is located in Santa Ynez Valley in California, which
has cost about 28 million U.S. dollars.
The ranch is very remote in the Santa Ynez Valley, about ten minutes outside the town of Los Olivos and about 13 km north of the town of Santa Ynez. The region lives primarily on the wine.
they bought the ranch in 1988 and in the same train her parents` home in Encino, California abandoned. Go to Neverland Ranch was among other things, a theme park with various attractions, a zoo, cinema, museums. The total size is 11 km ². If the media are talking about the Neverland Ranch, is usually the station of the leisure path shown. This house in the style of Disney movies was not the residence of the property.
They have many sick sooner or invited from socially disadvantaged families originated children on their ranch.

M.J. : Yes, I invited the one where the parents can not afford that. Or where the children missing part in parks not because they have a disability.

M. : What have they done then as the Neverland Ranch was built ready?
What was the situation with their own children?

M.J. : I got married in 1994 Lisa Marie Presley, daughter of the King of Rock `n` Roll Elvis Presley. With it I got no children and was divorced in 1996. Then I was put back on a new album "History". Incidentally, I was active in several social organizations and charity concerts have given to help children.
1996 to 1999 I was married to the nurse Deborah Jeanne Rowe. Then my first son, Prince Michael I was born. After the birth of my second child, Paris Michael Katherine, the relationship is also, unfortunately, failed.
2002 my third child, Prince Michael Jackson II was born, but where is the mother of anonymity.

M. : Oh yes, Then came their headlines, because of child abuse in the media befor!
... Oh yes, then they were only about 1 in the press because of the reproach of child abuse!
For, in November 2003 he was an arrest warrant against her, alleging abuse of minors. Bail in the millions, they could avoid the trial.
In December 2004, led the prosecution of Los Angeles a search of Neverland Ranch to search for the evidence of the lawsuit against them.
As in 1993 they were accused, they with the 13-year-old boy Jordan Chandler, who was with his close friend, to have had a sexual relationship.

M.J. : Yes, but the trial began on child abuse in 2005 in Los Angeles: I threatened up to 20 years in prison. But mid-2005, I was acquitted of all charges.
After my acquittal of charges of child abuse I had left my main residence in Los Olivos and moved with my three children in the Kingdom of Bahrain.
The Neverland Ranch has been closed until further notice, because I the estate since the end of the process no longer regarded as his home.
I was quite taken back from the public.

M. : That`s it. In time, they have also greatly changed externally ... How the early 1980s, they have undergone their first operation. They stated in an interview with Oprah Winfrey to have undergone two operations on his nose, and an engagement on the chin. They said that he was obliged for medical reasons
In addition, interventions were made by the head, as they have been injured in a fireworks effect the shooting of an advertising and Sport.
In 1993, she suffered from a skin disease vitiligo destroys the pigmentation of their skin and the color has changed.
.. Let us make the end what they want now?

M.J. : On; 5 March 2009 I announced my comeback at a press conference with the concert series "This Is It" in London`s O2 Arena.
At first I had planned only 10 concerts. But after it came to a large demand, we have 40 more scheduled dates for the concert.

M: Oh, thank you because they were Michael Jackson, we express
Your fingers crossed, so they have a good comeback.

M.J.: Thank you!

M: Yes dear viewers, now we are back at the end of my talk show. Again Thanks also to my audience and viewers at home. Turn Næste week, back to himself at times here at
MTV one. Bye.
ANONYM stellte diese Frage am 30.03.2010 - 15:45


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Antwort von oOMaSunnyOo | 30.03.2010 - 15:52
Das klingt bzw liest sich wie von einer Übersetzungsmashine übersetzt...
ich würde an deiner stelle den text nochmal ganz in ruhe durchgehn und versuchen möglichst verbangleichungen und Personen zu achten...


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Antwort von Aurinko90 | 30.03.2010 - 15:57
Ich hatte echt überlegt, ob ich so nett bin, aber ab "M. : I am pleased, Nice that they are there." kam ich mir dann auch verarscht vor :D

 
Antwort von GAST | 30.03.2010 - 16:15
M. : Welcome to the Jerry Springer Show on MTV.
Today our guest is the King of pop - Michael Jackson.
.. Hello Michael Jackson, How are you ?

M.J. : I`m fine.Thank You.
M. : It`s a pleasure that you have come here.
Michael, how did your solo career start and go on?

M.J. : My album, named "Off the Wall", which immediately captured to the top of the charts appeared in 1979 . Three years later the album was released with the title "Thriller". Meanwhile, I was experimenting with new vocal layers and a new style of disco music. So he invented his own dance direction for moonwalk and robot thanks. (Video)
The video clip for the title track "Thriller" was among the most expensive productions in the music industry. The album hit all hitherto existing sales records. more than 50 million times the plate was sold.
In 1984 my producer and me got eight Grammys for "Thriller."
The album had landed within a few days at the number one of the best selling records in the world. The new singles "Billie Jean" and "Beat it" were successful songs as well.
But in 1989 I earned 125 million U.S. dollars by producing songs.
"Dangerous" in 1992 was a worldwide success with over 30 million records sold. Since the early 1990s I took me on my private estate "Neverland back.

M. : You`ve just talked about the Neverland Ranch.
The Neverland Ranch is located in Santa Ynez Valley in California, it
has cost about 28 million U.S. dollars.
The ranch is very remote in the Santa Ynez Valley, about ten minutes outside the town of Los Olivos and about 13 km north of the town of Santa Ynez. The region lives primarily on the wine.
they bought the ranch in 1988 and in the same train her parents` home in Encino, California abandoned. Go to Neverland Ranch was among other things, a theme park with various attractions, a zoo, cinema, museums. The total size is 11 km ². If the media are talking about the Neverland Ranch, is usually the station of the leisure path shown. This house in the style of Disney movies was not the residence of the property.
They have many sick sooner or invited from socially disadvantaged families originated children on their ranch.

M.J. : Yes, I invited the one where the parents can not afford that. Or where the children missing part in parks not because they have a disability.

M. : What have they done then as the Neverland Ranch was built ready?
What was the situation with their own children?

M.J. : I got married in 1994 Lisa Marie Presley, daughter of the King of Rock `n` Roll Elvis Presley. With it I got no children and was divorced in 1996. Then I was put back on a new album "History". Incidentally, I was active in several social organizations and charity concerts have given to help children.
1996 to 1999 I was married to the nurse Deborah Jeanne Rowe. Then my first son, Prince Michael I was born. After the birth of my second child, Paris Michael Katherine, the relationship is also, unfortunately, failed.
2002 my third child, Prince Michael Jackson II was born, but where is the mother of anonymity.

M. : Oh yes, Then came their headlines, because of child abuse in the media befor!
... Oh yes, then they were only about 1 in the press because of the reproach of child abuse!
For, in November 2003 he was an arrest warrant against her, alleging abuse of minors. Bail in the millions, they could avoid the trial.
In December 2004, led the prosecution of Los Angeles a search of Neverland Ranch to search for the evidence of the lawsuit against them.
As in 1993 they were accused, they with the 13-year-old boy Jordan Chandler, who was with his close friend, to have had a sexual relationship.

M.J. : Yes, but the trial began on child abuse in 2005 in Los Angeles: I threatened up to 20 years in prison. But mid-2005, I was acquitted of all charges.
After my acquittal of charges of child abuse I had left my main residence in Los Olivos and moved with my three children in the Kingdom of Bahrain.
The Neverland Ranch has been closed until further notice, because I the estate since the end of the process no longer regarded as his home.
I was quite taken back from the public.

M. : That`s it. In time, they have also greatly changed externally ... How the early 1980s, they have undergone their first operation. They stated in an interview with Oprah Winfrey to have undergone two operations on his nose, and an engagement on the chin. They said that he was obliged for medical reasons
In addition, interventions were made by the head, as they have been injured in a fireworks effect the shooting of an advertising and Sport.
In 1993, she suffered from a skin disease vitiligo destroys the pigmentation of their skin and the color has changed.
.. Let us make the end what they want now?

M.J. : On; 5 March 2009 I announced my comeback at a press conference with the concert series "This Is It" in London`s O2 Arena.
At first I had planned only 10 concerts. But after it came to a large demand, we have 40 more scheduled dates for the concert.

M: Oh, thank you because they were Michael Jackson, we express
Your fingers crossed, so they have a good comeback.

M.J.: Thank you!

M: Yes dear viewers, now we are back at the end of my talk show. Again Thanks also to my audience and viewers at home. Turn Næste week, back to himself at times here at
MTV one. Bye.

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