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hi ich hab zwei kurze texte verfasst, bin mir aber nicht sicher, ob sie richtig sind.

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Born on 23.12.1985 in Scotland became the Scottish Trials rider world famous through his internet video, which is seen over 14 Million times.
He mixes stunts from the BMX scene and the Trial scene. He’s riding over 12 years and did never except that great reaction he got.


You have to ride 4 times through different sections in 2:30 min. and every time you do something wrong e.g. touching the obstacle with the body you get penalty points. Winner is the one with the lowest points.

danke schon im vorraus!
GAST stellte diese Frage am 01.02.2010 - 14:56

 
Antwort von GAST | 01.02.2010 - 16:38
Born on 23.12.1985 in Scotland became The Scottish Trials rider, born on Dec. 23rd,1985 in Scotland ,became world famous through his internet video, which is seen has been watched/looked at over 14 million times. He has mixed stunts from the BMX scene and the Trial scene. He has been riding for over 12 years and did never except that great reaction he got. ((1))



You have to ride 4 times through different sections four times in 2:30 min. and every time if you do something wrong e.g. touch the obstacle with the body you will get penalty points. Winner is the one with the lowest amount of points.

1) total unverständlich?


Korrektur: fett = eingefügt/verbessert /// schräg = gestrichen

ha.lo

 
Antwort von GAST | 01.02.2010 - 16:47
danke!
was meinst du mit "total unverständlich?"
weist du nicht was ich sagen wollte? oder hä?

ich wollte sagen, das er die reaktion die er bekommen hat nicht erwartet hat.
wie kann man das sonst richtig! sagen?

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