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pasion
und love wird klein geschrieben und dance mit nur einem "a"!

another schreibt man zusammen, so wie ich es geschrieben habe.
nächster satz:
dancing helps me

wie sagt man :
immer als musik lief,...

äääh nee, eigentlich:
whenever the music runs

also welches stimmt nun?

Also da sind eien MEnge Fehler drin cih verbessr jetzt einfach mal so gut ich kann^^

Hello everyone,
I am going to tell you something about my passion and love for dancing. For me it is the hole world, if I dance it fells like another world. Altough dancinghelps me to forget about my problems and the stress I have. Sometimes I just like to turn the music on and dance.
I and my crew attended a to of competitions and we are pretty successfull. But it was a long and hard was to become so much success. I can glady say that among the work and traning we always have a lot of fun.
That brings me to my next point the tranig! We pratice a lot, twice a week and always between four ore five hours. We work os hard because we want to become the best and win more competitions.
Well the competitions are quite importent and if we are going to attent in one we practice three times per week, because we know that the outher cres do not sleep!
When we than after all the work perform on a competition, we have so much adrenalin in us and we really want to show how hard we have worked. And if the judges rank us good we are so thankfull because we know our work was not for nothing. Whether, we know this bevore the competions, too. That is because our parents and freins suppot us very much.
When I am on stage performing I can fell that dancing is my first and biggest love. I do not know how th explain how big my love for dancing is. Maybe I invest to much time in it but I can not help me. I just love it!