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David McKennas movie "American History X" from 1998 is about two brothers.
The older brother Derek Vinyard was from a group with right-wing extremist attitude names "Venice Beach White Supremocist". When Derek shoot at two black guys, who died, he must go into prison for 3 years, where he turn to another opinion. But when he comes out of it, his younger brother Danny is at Dereks old way. Derek try to put him out of this but then it becomes a tragic end.
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Before the beginning of the main scene, where Derek is talking to his brother about the prison, Danny goes with his freinds to a party from Cameron Alexande, the leader of the group. When Derek is appearing, he discover his girlfriend Stacy and try to persuade her to go away with him, but she is too convinced of her group and can`t understand Dereks decision. After that Derek goes to Cameron, where is Danny, too. Derek sent him outside and talk to the leader about his decision to go out of that. Then the conversation beginns to eskalate and Cameron provoke him. As a result of that Derek beats him and run away. But before he can do this Seth comes with a gun and want to shoot at him, but Derek can outwit Seth and flee from the party. After Derek puts the gun away his brother attacks him and Derek try to talk with him and beginn to talk from his experience from the prison..

jetzt kommt noch die Inhaltsangabe von der Eigentlichen Szene aber die mach ich später
Danke schon mal im vorraus