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Internship Report (Korrektur)

Frage: Internship Report (Korrektur)
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Hallo könnte jemand bitte das hier korregieren?

Assosiation of the shop

In have passed my threemonth intership in a Copy Shop.
This Copy Shop, which is in the H.street 17 or obverse the university from K.,
is owned by a couple, who has made independent. The Copy Shop is for 14 years there. How the name is called, you can copy papers or other things in the copy shop.
To copy papers are only one thing of many other things, amongst other things you can laminate, cut, integrate and so forth. The big assortment of different copy alternatives or
print alternatives, raise the shop from the "gray lump" of other copy shops weighty up. Where other Copy Shops print only standard formats like A4 or A3, print this Copy Shop
the differentes(verschiedensten-wusste nicht wie ich das sonst darstellen könnte) formats. A very clear compitition of this Copy Shop is the Copy Shop observe "Copy Blitz".

Activities

In the second week of my internship, I have done very often mistakes, which is handle with the printers. Mistakes like: instead of print both sides, I only print it one site.
However, I get in the first week other work, that I had to do. I had to clean all glass plates of the printers, but I had to regard, that I didn`t spray with the cleanser the touchpad, which would immediately destroy the print. After I had done this work my boss told me, that I have to serve somebody. I serve a Man, who wanted a A0 Paper laminate for his Hockey team. I went to the Computer and give the command to print the Paper from the colour Plotter. A colour Plotter is a machine, which have the ability to print large Papers. That was my first contact to a Customer. An other big work I had done was, that one day a couple came in the shop and wanted a Wedding card from us. My Boss told them, that we only print cards not design cards, but I told him that I could design the cards with a image editing program. The couple give me there trust and I designed there card with Adope Photoshop CS 4. The result was very good and my boss was very proud of me.

Some Days I only stayed in the shop and bored myself, but overall it was a very good time these three months. I have learned very much of the life after school. I wouldn`t be a copy shop owner, because I would study and be something particular.



Ps: meint ihr ich müsste noch etwas erwähnen oder soll ich etwas rauslasen? was sagt ihr? wir müssen nur eine seite dazu schreiben.

Danke
GAST stellte diese Frage am 27.04.2009 - 20:28


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13		 Antwort von Teufelcheen (ehem. Mitglied) | 27.04.2009 - 21:06
Also ob du was dazuschreiben solltest weiß ich nich da ich nicht bei deinem Praktikum dabei war^^ Aber ich denke schon das du so die wesentliche Aspekte beschrieben hast.
Ich hab die jetzt also nur Grammatik und Vokabular korrigiert, aber du solltest nächstes mal nochmal lesen was du schreibst;) waren einige kleine Fehler drin die nicht sein müssen^^


Association of the shop

I’ve passed my three month internship in a Copy Shop.
This Copy Shop, which is in the H.street 17 and obverse the university from K., is owned by a couple, who is self-employed and exists since 14 years. Like the name says you can copy papers or other things in a copy shop.
To copy papers is only one thing of several others, because you can also laminate, cut, and integrate and so on. Their big assortment of different alternatives to copy and print increases their quality a lot. Also most Copy shops can only print standard formats like A4 and A3, but this one can print many different other formats. A very good advantage is that they observe the “Copy Blitz”.

Activities

In the second week of my internship, I’ve done a lot mistakes, which by learning how to handle the printers, like just printing one side instead of both. However at the first week I got other work to do, by cleaning all printers’ glass plates but I had to regard not to spray the touchpad, because that would harm the print. After that my boss told me to serve a customer. The man I served wanted an A0 paper for his hockey team, so I went to the computer to make his printout by using the color plotter. A color Plotter is a machine, which have the ability to print larger papers than normal printers. Another big work I had to do was that one day a couple came into the shop and wanted us to make wedding cards. My Boss told them that we only print cards and don’t design them. I told him that I could design the cars with an image-editing program and the couple gave me their assurance that I’ll do it good. I used “Adobe Photoshop CS 4” to design the card and was as happy about my achievement as my boss.

At some days I stood in the shop and just bored, but at all this was a very good time. I learned a lot about life after school, but I have to say that I don’t want to work in copy shop, because I’m going to study to become somebody special.


Lg Teufelcheen

 
 Antwort von GAST | 27.04.2009 - 21:15
Hey danke dir für deine ausfürliche Korrektur. :)


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13		 Antwort von agathamary (ehem. Mitglied) | 27.04.2009 - 21:36
Teufelcheen hat sehr gute Arbeit geleistet, aber ich würde noch ein paar Sachen korrigieren:

Association of the shop

I’ve spent my three month internship in a Copy Shop.

This Copy Shop, which is in the H.street 17 and obverse the university from K., is owned by a couple, who is self-employed and exists since 14 years.

1. Frage: was meinst du mit observe?
2. so klingt es, als ob das Pärchen seit 14 Jahren exisitiert
Vorschlag:
This copy shop is privately owned by a couple and has been in operation for 14 years.

As the name says you can copy papers or other things in a copy shop.

To copy papers is only one thing among several others, because you can also laminate, cut, and integrate and so on.

A very good advantage is that they observe (?) the “Copy Blitz”.

Activities

In the second week of my internship, I’ve made a lot mistakes when learning how to handle the printers, for example just printing one side instead of both.

However in the first week I got other jobs to do, e.g. cleaning all printers’ glass plates but I had to be careful not to spray the touchpad, because that would harm the print.

A color Plotter is a machine (hier darf kein Komma stehen) which is able to print larger papers than normal printers.

Another important job I had to do was to help a couple that came into the shop one day and wanted us to make wedding cards.

My Boss told them that we only print cards and don’t design them. I told him that I could design the cars with an image-editing program and the couple gave me their assurance that I would do it well.

On some days I stood in the shop and was just bored, but all in all this was a very good time.

Ich hoffe, das hilft. wenn du Fragen hast, dann melde dich.

 
 Antwort von GAST | 27.04.2009 - 21:38
Presentation of the shop

I completed my three month internship in a copy shop, which is in the H.street 17 and obverse the university from K. This copy shop is owned by a self-employed couple and has been existing for 14 years. Like the name says you can copy pieces of paper or other things in a copy shop.
To copy pieces of paper is only one thing of several others because you can also laminate, cut, and integrate. The copy shop`s large variety of different alternatives to copy and print increases the quality a lot. Also, most copy shops can only print standard formats like A4 and A3, but this one can print many different other formats (zum Beispiel?). A very good advantage is that they observe the “Copy Blitz”. (erkläre was copy blitz ist)

Activities

In the second week of my internship I made a lot of mistakes, like just printing one side of a piece of paper instead of both. But by learning how to handle the printers, I learned to do things the right way. However, I had more work to do in the first week, such as cleaning all printers’ glass plates, but I had to regard not to spray the touchpad because that would harm the print. Afterwards my boss told me to serve a customer. The man I served wanted an A0 paper for his hockey team, so I went to the computer to make his printout by using the color plotter. A color plotter is a machine, which has the ability to print larger papers than normal printers. I had to do another big job when a couple came into the shop one day and wanted us to make wedding cards. My boss told them that we only print cards and don’t design them. I told him that I could design the cards with an image-editing program and the couple gave me their assurance that I’ll do it good. I used “Adobe Photoshop CS 4” to design the cards and was as happy about my achievement as my boss.

On some days I stood in the shop and was just bored, but all in all this was a very good time. I learned a lot about life after school, but I have to say that I don’t want to work in copy shop because I’m going to study to become somebody special.

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