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Könnte jemand kontrolieren ob ich die Sätze richtig geschrieben habe und ob ich sie richtig formiliert habe?


1.I am a right morning muzzle then I hate it, e.g., if me somebody in
the morning wakes.I am helpful, helps other people
with pleasure and very like animals there I animals very much loves,
because I myself have a dog.

2.I am not of the opinion heroes at all gives.

There are only people I very much admires which other people help or save her life.
There should be even more of such people.

3.A good friend would have to have the same interests like I with it we well get on.
He would have to go friendly and helpful his fals I sometimes help needs.
A good friend one must be able to trust.
I have such a friend I also appreciating.

4.I would like to create my vocational A-level,
I want to work in a well paid job and sometimes later I want to bekomme children.
I also wish me a own house in wich I can live with my family.

5.I would have it with pleasure better in the life than my parents.
I would have a weel paid job and a good job. Since from
charakter here I am just as my parents and I find this good.

6.You can be ecologically friendly and helpful and try to improve the world a
little while one in social.programme involved.

7.I would pull with pleasure after 30-40 years, nevertheless,
again Poland because Poland my homeland is and I like this Land very much.
The people are nice there, I like
the scenery very much and there I feel fine simply completely.

8.I am not interested at all in the politics, so I have there
no right opinion about that I could represent.

9.I think that it is better if there so remained as it is now because in my opinion the
people do not like if something change.

10.To me fellt there nothing should be a good citizen except one
GAST stellte diese Frage am 08.10.2008 - 15:14


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Antwort von BursaPlaya16 (ehem. Mitglied) | 08.10.2008 - 15:31
ehrlich
gesagt ist da viel falsch wenn du mich fragst ^^
aber vllt liege ich falsch

 
Antwort von GAST | 08.10.2008 - 15:40
Kann es sein, dass Dr. Google das übersetzt hat?


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Antwort von *Haselhörnchen* (ehem. Mitglied) | 08.10.2008 - 15:41
ich antworte dir alex: definitiv: ja^^


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Antwort von BursaPlaya16 (ehem. Mitglied) | 08.10.2008 - 15:42
also habe ich recht das da ziemlich viel falsch ist wie z.b bei he she it kommt das s mit nich bei I


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Antwort von ricü-fingerbeisser (ehem. Mitglied) | 08.10.2008 - 15:44
überhaupt die satzstellung^^


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Antwort von BursaPlaya16 (ehem. Mitglied) | 08.10.2008 - 15:46
z.B das hier
if me somebody in the morning wakes
heißt das nicht if somebody wakes me in the morning up
glaube ich zumindest ^^


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Antwort von *Haselhörnchen* (ehem. Mitglied) | 08.10.2008 - 15:48
am besten solltest du den text mal auf deutsch posten,dann könnte ich ihn dir übersetzten. so versteh man zum teil ja gar nicht,was du überhaupt sagen willst. diese zeitinvestition wäre mir die 50 credits wert^^


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Antwort von ricü-fingerbeisser (ehem. Mitglied) | 08.10.2008 - 15:48
if someone würde ich jetzt sagen


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Antwort von Mushi (ehem. Mitglied) | 08.10.2008 - 16:11
1.I am a right morning muzzle because I hate it, if somebody wakes me in
the morning .I am helpful, I help other people
with pleasure and I like animals, because of that I have got a dog.

2.I don`t think that there are any heroes.
There are only people, who I admire, because they help other people and/or save their lifes.
There should be even more of those people.

3.A good friend should be interested in the same things, that I like.
He or she should be friendly and helpful in talking about my mistakes, because sometimes I can`t notice them on my own. (Weiß nicht, ob du das sagen wolltest?!)
A good friend should be able to trust me and I should be able to trust him.
I have such a friend, who I appreciate.

4.I would like to do my vocational A-level,
I want to work in a well paid job and later I want to get children.
I also wish me a own house where I can live with my family.

5.I will try to have a better life than my parents haven.
I would have a well paid job and a good job. Since from
charakter here I am just as my parents and I find this good (Was?).

6.You can be helpful and try to improve the world a
little more withe the help of social activities.

7.I would pull with pleasure after 30-40 years, (Was?) nevertheless,
Poland again because Poland is my homecountry and I like this country very much.
The people are nice there, I like
the scenery very much and there I feel fine.

8.I am not interested in politics, so I have
no opinion that I could represent.

9.I think that it is better if there is no change, because people don`t like big changes.


10.I think there shouldn`t be a good citizen, except one (?)


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Antwort von Mushi (ehem. Mitglied) | 08.10.2008 - 16:13
Sorry, bei 2.I "save other`s lifes"


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Antwort von Mushi (ehem. Mitglied) | 08.10.2008 - 16:15
Schon wieder xD
Sollte nicht "haven" heißen, sondern have ^^

 
Antwort von GAST | 08.10.2008 - 17:22
Mein Vorschlag:
(Im gebräuchlichen englisch, nicht sehr formal, aber korrekt :))

1. I am quite grumpy when I wake up in the morning, that’s the reason why I don’t like to be woken up by other people in the morning. I am a helpful person; I like animals and have a dog myself.

2. I don’t believe that there are heroes in this world.
I consider that there are many people out there, who help others or even rescue other lifes.
Of that kind we should have more!

3. A good friend should have the same interests like me.
He or She should be friendly and helpful, and should be able to point out my mistakes when I overlook them.
We should be able to trust one another.
I have got such a friend and I am very happy about it.

4. I hope that I’ll achieve my A-levels. Thereafter I want to get a well-paid job and maybe, after a few years, some children.
I want to have an own house to raise my children and live with my family.

5. I want to have a better life than my parents had.
I want to have a better job then they had, which I can enjoy.
Character wise, I assume, I am a little like my parents and like it.

6. One can try to improve the environment close to oneself by joining a relief organization which will make the whole world a little better.

7. After 30-40 years I’d like to move to another country.
I would probably move to Poland again, because it’s my homeland and I think the countryside is very beautiful.
The people in Poland are friendly and sociable where I would feel at ease.

8. I am not interested in politics, I have not an own political opinion I could stand for.

9. I don’t like changes, it’s better if everything remains like it is.

(10. I think there shouldn’t be any good citizen, except one.) ? verstehe ich nicht, sag mal auf deutsch

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