kann mir mal jemand englisch korigieren?

wär voll toll wenn mir jemand bei englisch mit korigieren (hauptsächlich grammatik ;)) helfen könnt :D meine brüder sind dazu nicht fähig :(

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-Australia-

Great things you should visit, when you want to travel to Australia.

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City`s/ town`s
II. Animals
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I. City`s/ town`s

→ Canbera (capital of Australia) You should visit it, because there are many places where you can go swimming or lay in the sun. In Canbera take many people the bike. The capital of Australia is by the mountains. In this city lives over 300 thousand of people.

→ Sydney (in the near of Canbera, 3km) This city should you visit, too, because this city has a long beautiful white sand beach. In this city you can visit the famous Opera House and the Habour Bridge. In Sydney lives over 3,7 millions of people.

→ Melbourne (Victoria) It is a cultural and a taste full [=etwa Geschmacks voll] city for young and old people. There gives great markets, beaches and a lot of sights e.g.: Immigration Museum, State Parliament House,... and more. Melbourne has a international airport and trains to the other states around Victoria. In Melbourne lives over 3,7 millions of people.

→ The Phillip Islands (Victoria) This is famous for the penguins of Australia at Phillip Island Nature Park. On this island lives over 3,5 millions of people.

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II. Animals

!WARNING: in Australia gives a lot of TOXIC ANIMALS. You should talk about in you travel center!

→ Wombat, they are typical animals for Australia. They are 70– 120 centimeter long and get a weight of 20- 40 kg. They lives in South Australia, Victoria, New South Wales, Queensland and Tasmanien.

→ Kangaroo, they are typical for Australia, too. Kangaroos can ran up to 50km/h. They can up to 9 meters jump. They are different big. This animal lives in Newguinea and Tasmanien.
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