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London
I will tell you something about the history of London.
500.000 years ago was the valley of the Thamse homeland of many stralling hunter and gatherer but prime the Romans settled big and fortified colonies. 43 years after Christ imperator Claudius arranged London which was known as “Londium”, and engineered the first bridge across the Thamse. Boadicea attacked London in 61. Today it is possible to see reminats of Roman’s handwork like the City Wall, which was built in the year 200. 410 the roman occupation left the country. King Ethelbert built the St. Pauls Cathedral in 604. 834 the Vikings assaulted London. Alfred the Great ascend the throw of Wessex in 884.The Danes conquered London and destroyed the London Bridge in 1014. In 1066 was the battle of Hastings that followed authority. The first Stone bridge across the Thamse was built in 1176. In 1649 Charles 1. was behead. The Great Fire destroyed a fifth of the town and raged 4 days in 1666. London was the largest City in the world with 8.600.000 inhabitants in 1801. In 1837 was the assumption of office from Queen Victoria. In 1863 was the initiation of the first underground between Paddington and Farringdon.

And now I want to invite you some information. London is a city in the east of England and it is the capital of Great Britain. Today live more than 7, 1 million inhabitants in London.
London is one of the famous cities in the world and the biggest city of Europe. The language is English. The colors of the flag are red, blue and white, this is the Union Jack. Over two million people visit London every year. London has 33 parts. The famous city is Greenwich. In London there are 215 Parks. The famous park is the Richmond Park. The most popular square in London is the Trafalgar Square. London has 17 Bridges for example the oldest one the London Bridge or the Tower Bridge are very famous.