Bitte Bitte Korrekturlesen

Huhu Leute ich hab als Hausaufgabe aufbekommen einen Text zu schreiben über Sachen die wir in der Vergangenheit machen wollten..wie zB trampen oder so

..um aus unserer Heimat wegzukommen..
hab mir da dann mal was ausgedacht & aufgeschrieben.
wär total nett wenn ihr das mal durchguckt,
denn englisch ist nich mein bestes Fach und der Text wird benotet :-(

Also :

In the 1970`s I was 16 years old and wasn`t happy at home.So I decided to leave this city and go round the world.
But I hadn`t enough money,because with my pocket money and my money which I earned when I helped in the house
(things like cutting the gras or washing dishes), I could only pay one flight to another country.
I kept my plan for myself and determined to save up the money.
Two years later I had enough money to do a journey round the world.I told my parents about my thoughts,they were suprised but they said it`s certain a good experience.
The next day I packed all my clothes and important things into the big bag,drove to the airport and searched a cheap flight.
Six hours later I was in Spain and searched a hotel where I could stay the night.
It was a great but sometimes also an dangerous trip which I`d never regret.

Bitte bitte helft mir :(