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Hallo : )
Ich muss für Englisch einen Text über den Begriff "Proletarit" verfassen .
Ich hab es versucht verständlich zu übersetzen und hoffe mal, dass nicht allzuviele Fehler drin sind. Wäre super nett, wenn jemand mal drüber lesen könnte und eventuell Ahnung von Englisch hat .. Ich schmeiß die Zeiten immer durcheinander ... Danke schonmal im voraus! Schönes We euch ..

proletariat
This perception was used from the Romans and described townsmen who lived in the lower class and didn’t go to army because of the principle of self-equipment. (peasants, day laborers, small craftsmen and grocers)

After the revolution of French, the people used it for those who lived under the third class of society.
By the use of Karl Marx this perception gets another meaning – He wanted to identify the subject of the historical emancipation process. In his book from the communistic manifest (1848) the proletariats were the wageworker class.
He calls the people proletarian who saved their living by selling their manpower. They had only the satisfaction of the things that they needed to stay alive.
Their name “proletariat” explained that their single ownership had been their progeny. By a fight against the classes and revolution, the formation of society was detached. The political strategy of the Marxism of Karl Marx was to make the workers clear that this situation cannot work anymore, so they get a revolutionary awareness and fight against the rivals of the proletariat.