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Today I`m going to present my book "Abomination" which is written by Robert Swindells.

(Man fängt nicht direkt mit "das Problem ist ..." an, da fehlt eine angemessene Einleitung!)
The book deals with Martha`s familiar problems and the difficulties there are because her parents should not get to know that she has got a boyfriend. The two of they have to meet in secretly. One day Scott knocks on Martha`s door, when her parents are at work. She is shocked because he is not allowed to find out about the Abomination. She lets him inside the house and he hears something crying. Martha has no other choice but throwing him out. A few days later she decides to tell him the truth because she doesn`t know what to do with her secret.

nd now I want to read out the extract in which she is telling him the truth. (Seitenangaben interessieren glaube ich nicht.. P.69/70)
Who or what the Abomination is you will know after reading this book!

The book is perfect for people who don`t enjoy reading because it is not too long. ^^

Deine eigene Meinung zu dem Buch fehlt noch & evtl. solltest du auch noch 2-3 Sätze über den Autor sagen. ;D