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hi! wir müssen montag die folgende aufgabe abgeben - das wird unsere einzige schriftliche zensur bis auf die klausur dieses halbjahr und deshalb brauch ich da was zwischen 13 und 15pkt :) wenn ihr noch ein paar aspekte für die thematik habt, die ich mit rein bringen sollte dann immer her damit. bin für alles dankbar. so hab jetz >2h dran gesessen, hoffe es hat sich gelohnt und ihr habt nich allzuviel zu korrigieren!


Choose one section of questions and answer them extensively in one text.
c) Have you ever read a novel or story online, or an e-book? Do you think that this is going to be the future of reading?

What was my intention for choosing this topic? Generally I am interested in technical things, especially in computer themes and it seems to be very interesting to look into the future and give an outlook. On the other hand I have already read some e-books and know something about them.
At first I want to give some information about e-books in general and the development of the e-book.
An e-book is a book in digital form. It is similar to a real book in the fact of the content – giving an examply: the directory or the page enumeration, but has the advantages of a digital media – for example the possibility of searching words. An e-book could be found for the first time in 1993, when the manual of a computer game was in the PDF-format. In 1999 to 2000 the first tries of real commercialization started. Nowadays especially professional literature is published in the digital form; there are approximately 1000 titles to buy.
As I already said above I still have read some e-books. It is correct and was an interesting experience. I read these e-books because on the one hand they were only available in the internet and not in the printed form and on the other hand they were free. If I would have read these texts in a book, I would have been forced to buy them for much money. In the fact that these stories were interesting to read, but nowhere published – because it is a really specific theme and should be not very public – I had to read the e-book and did not regret it till today. Surely it would have been easier to have a printed book, able to be read in the evening before I go to sleep, but it was not very uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer with something to eat beneath me and read the interesting book. When I got tired, I set a bookmark and was able to continue reading where I had stopped the day before. If I read a book at first mostly I am to lazy to take a bookmark onto the side and secondly I think that I am so clever and able to remember where I stopped – but often this is a false conclusion and I have to search where I finished reading. Of course it is really annoying and a minus for a printed book. I would read an e-book anytime again, if I am not able to get it cheap in the printed form. In the first instance it is important for a pupil to get with less money a mass of information and if the e-book is for free nobody with the same circumstances would buy the book if he had another possibility to get the same text, even though it can be a little bit more stressful to read a long text with hundreds of sites on the computer. Nevertheless it is possible to do something during reading the e-book – you could visit a forum, listen to music and chat with other people during sitting in front of the computer and reading a book. If you are not able to do many things at the same time or one after another only for a short time you could shut all other programs and disturbing things down, so that you can read calmly. For me it is normal to perform many tasks at the same time, but from friends, relative and parents I sometimes hear how it is possible and that I will go insane, if I furthermore do it – but they also have to admit that it is really amazing that I am very good at things which have to do with the computer. That could be a reason why I am really interested in reading e-books, whereas my relatives and other people are not willing to read an e-book. In my opinion they are not really experienced in things which have to do with the computer and are scared to encounter with new things they do not know. For me an e-book is a good invention with good perspectives but some decisive objections. Nevertheless the printed book has some disadvantages, too. In my eyes the e-book is a normal step – in modern life you can find so many examples for digitalisation, for example the music on the CD, films on DVD or catalogues on the internet. It is really logical to publish texts and other things in the digital media. But the DVD or the CD has no disadvantages, the e-book unfortunately has. It is normally uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer and read a book – normally you lie down on the bed, a book in front of you and enjoy the warm and cuddle feeling. With a notebook it is possible, but stressful for the eyes – they see all the time glaring light and the noise of the fans could disturb the nice silence. You always have to scroll down irritated to the next page and you can not lie down. But you can enlarge the script if you should wear glasses or search for a fixed position. Another positive aspect is that an e-book nowadays is often for free, but you could not take a notebook to the doctor and read it in the waiting room. Furthermore it is not possible today to equip every student with a notebook to be able to read school lecture.
In my opinion printed books have some advantages still today, but if smaller and more portable devices – the handhelds are a step into the right direction - are invented it could be reality that nearly every person is reading an e-book in some years. How wonderful would it be to share the texts with other owners of e-book-devices and get a new virtual book for free– but it also would be possible if it the digital rights management allow it – and this is another disadvantage – other people could define what you are allowed to do and what not. This could be a high risk for your personal freedom. But the e-book could be the future of reading, because in the future it will be more necessary to save paper and valuable woods.

noch paar verbesserungsvorschläge?:) z.b. punkte die noch nicht angesprochen wurden, etc?
GAST stellte diese Frage am 03.03.2007 - 22:12

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 22:15
omg ist das viel! oO

Ich les mir das jetzt nich durch und versuch das zuverstehn.. sry :)

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 22:17
schade :(
vielleicht ist ja jemand anderes so nett :)

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 22:20
Naja, mehr als 10 wirst du damit wohl auf keinen Fall bekommen.
Sind einfach viel zu viele Fehler drin... Rechtschreibfehler einerseits (z.B. heißt es "too lazy" und nicht "to lazy"), Grammatikfehler andererseits (if und would zusammen in einem Satzteil? Nääääää... Gibt doch diesen "tollen" Merksatz: If und would und du gehst kaputt... -.-) und auch einfach völlig falsch verwendete Wörter, welche in dem Kontext einfach nicht passen.
Außerdem würde ich nicht damit anfangen, wieso du das Thema gewählt hast... Das kommt an den Schluss.
Die Erklärung, was e-books sind, solltest du dir eigentlich sparen können.
Ich würde mich an deiner Stelle einfach nochmal hinsetzen und es komplett überarbeiten.

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 22:21
joa also ich les mir das mal durch... kann aber vllt n bisschen dauern


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Antwort von julchen2005 (ehem. Mitglied) | 03.03.2007 - 22:23
ich stimme scotty zu..
deine wortwahl is manchmal irgendwie seltsam und für einen englischsprachigen sicher nich klar, was du meinst^^

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 22:28
@ julchen und scotty,
habt ihr das jetzt wirklich gelesen?ß

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 22:29
puh okay also jetzt wo ich angefangen hab das zu berichtigen muss ich mal sagen dass es wohl noch länger dauert als ich dachte... aber du hast ja bestimmt zeit ^^

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 22:37
okay also hier ist schonmal der erste teil:

My intention for choosing this topic is that I am interested in technical things in general, but especially in computers. To me it seems very interesting to catch a glimpse of the future and to have an outlook on the future. Furthermore I have already read some e-books and know something about them.
At first I want to give some information on e-books in general and the development of the e-book.
An e-book is a book in digital form. Concerning the content e-books are similar to real books - for example the directory and the pagination. But the advantage of digital media is for example the possibility of searching for specific words. An e-book was found for the first time in 1993, when the manual of a computer game was provided in the PDF-format. In 1999 and 2000 there were first attempts to commercialize e-books. Nowadays especially professional literature is published in the digital form. There are approximately 1000 titles available.

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 22:41
@schulsklavi: Doch, wieso nicht? Die fünf Minuten kann ich mir schon rausnehmen.
Was hast du denn anstattdessen in der Zeit gemacht? Rumgeklickt und versucht die Zeit zu vertreiben? :D


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Antwort von bombi (ehem. Mitglied) | 03.03.2007 - 22:48
Also ein tipp mit if sätzen is es mal so und so. besser is es statt "if" ein anderes wort zu benutzen bzw. eine andere redensart einfügen.

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 22:50
ist ganz okay....aber deine saete sind endlos lang...versuche sie zu verkuerzen!

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 22:58
zweiter teil:

As I have mentioned before, I have had the pleasure to read some e-books myself which was quite a nice experience. I read these e-books because on the one hand they were only available in the internet and not in the printed form and on the other hand they were free. If I would have read these texts in a book, I would have been forced to buy them for much money. Because of the fact that these stories were not published because it is a really specific topic that should not be publicized I had to read the e-book and did not regret it until today, because they were very interesting books to read. Certainly it would have been easier to have a printed book, to have the possibility to read it in the evening before I go to sleep, but it was not very uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer either. When I got tired, I set a bookmark and was able to continue reading where I had stopped the day before. Usually if I read a book I am too lazy to take a bookmark and I also think that I am clever enough to remember where I stopped. But often this is not the case and the next day I have to search for the right page very long. In my opinion, this is really annoying and a minus for a printed book. I would read an e-book again at any time, if I was not able to purchase it cheaply in the printed form.

aber meiner meinung nach widersprichst du dir da am ende n bisschen... erst sagst du dass du e-books besser findest und dann sagst du aber dass du jederzeit wieder ein e-books lesen würdest wenn du es nicht billig als gedrucktes buch kriegen könntest... aber wenn e-books eh besser sind müsstest du doch nicht erst versuchen es so zu kaufen, oder?

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 23:15
naja aber beim richtigen buch hab ich was in der hand und der nachteil mit dem im bett liegen stimmt dann ja auch nicht mehr- richtiges buch is halt irgendwie bequemer. schön warm im bett und lesen-anstatt aufm hässlichen stuhl vorm pc und scrollen+augen extrem anstrengen :/

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 23:32
nächster teil:

In the first instance it is important for pupils to have access to a large amount of information without paying a lot of money. Since e-books are for free they are a good possibility for pupils to save some money but still get the same information. The only negative aspect is that it can be a little bit more exhausting to read a long text with hundreds of pages on the computer. Nevertheless it is possible to do something else while reading the e-book. You can for example visit a forum, listen to music and chat with other people while you are sitting in front of the computer and reading a book. If you are not able to do several things at the same time you can as well shut all other programs and disturbing things down so that you can read calmly. For me it is normal to cope with many tasks at the same time, but some friends of mine and relatives sometimes wonder how this is possible. They say that I will go insane, if I keep on doing it. But they also have to admit that it is really amazing that I am very good at things which have to do with the computer. That could be the reason why I am really interested in reading e-books, whereas my relatives and other people are not willing to read an e-book. In my opinion they are not really adept at things that have to do with the computer. Because of this they are scared to encounter new things they do not know. For me an e-book is a reasonable invention with good perspectives but still some decisive objections.

ähm... also mit den decisive objection bin ich nich so ganz zufrieden, mir fällt aber grad auch nicht ein, was ich da sonst schreiben könnte... kannst du mir vllt nochmal sagen was genau du damit ausdrücken wolltest? :)

 
Antwort von GAST | 03.03.2007 - 23:59
und der letzte:

Nevertheless the printed book has some disadvantages, too. In my opinion e-books are just one out of many examples for digitalisation. Other examples are music on CD’s, movies on DVD or catalogues on the internet. It is a corollary to publish texts and other things in the digital media. But the DVD or the CD do not have any disadvantages, the e-book unfortunately has. Usually it is uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer and read a book. Normally you prefer to lie on the bed or sit on a couch while reading a book and enjoy the warm and cuddle feeling. With a notebook it is possible to do that, too, but it is still tiring for the eyes. They have to cope with glaring light and the noise of the ventilators could disturb the nice silence. You always have to scroll down in order to get to the next page and you cannot lie down. But in case you have to wear glasses you can as well enlarge the script. Furthermore you are able to search for text passages in particular without having to search through the whole book. Another positive aspect is that nowadays e-books are often for free. But you cannot take a notebook to the doctor and read it in the waiting room. Furthermore it is not possible to equip every student with a notebook to be able to read school lecture.
In my opinion printed books still have some advantages today, but being smaller and more portable devices like handhelds are a step into the right direction. In some it could be reality that nearly every person is reading e-books. How wonderful would it be to share the texts with other users of e-book-devices and get a new virtual book for free. It would be possible, if the digital rights management allowed it. But this is another disadvantage - other people could define which books you are allowed to read and which are not. This could be a high risk for your personal freedom. But the e-book could be the future of reading, because it will be more necessary to save paper and valuable forests in future.

joa also natürlich werden da nun auch noch n paar fehler drin sein, perfekt ist mein englisch nun auch nicht, aber für nen fehlerindex von mindestens 12 punkten dürfte es reichen ^^
hm ja dann noch was allgemeines: versuche möglichst "good" zu vermeiden und durch was anderes zu ersetzen, weil good einfach total nichtssagend ist und von lehrern meistens nicht gern gesehen wird.
hm ja und dann wärs vllt noch ganz gut wenn du pro und contra n bisschen klarer auseinanderhalten würdest, weil es teilweise relativ durcheinander ist... geht mir aber in klausuren auch immer so dass ich einfach so schnell ganz viel schreiben will und es deswegen manchmal n bisschen kreuz und quer wird ^^
naja also ich hoffe ich konnte dir helfen und falls irgendwer noch einwände oder vorschläge hat kann er/sie sich ja melden

 
Antwort von GAST | 04.03.2007 - 01:17
woah krass... dickes danke für die viele mühe die du dir gegeben hast. echt super!

"ähm... also mit den decisive objection bin ich nich so ganz zufrieden, mir fällt aber grad auch nicht ein, was ich da sonst schreiben könnte... kannst du mir vllt nochmal sagen was genau du damit ausdrücken wolltest? :)"
wenn ichs richtig in erinnerung hab meinte ich damit, dass das ebook noch ein paar entscheidende/maßgebende nachteile hat.zumindest so in etwa meinte ich das.

darf ich fragen wodurch du so erfahren wurdest in englisch? englisch LK oder studium? :)

 
Antwort von GAST | 04.03.2007 - 01:20
so,hab das ganze jetzt nochmal etwas überarbeitet,bessere redewendungen verarbeitet,etc.
aber seht selbst und sagt mal obs so besser ist, ob ihr zufrieden seid und ob ich das eine oder andere argument noch reinbringen sollte?!

Choose one section of questions and answer them extensively in one text.
c) Have you ever read a novel or story online, or an e-book? Do you think that this is going to be the future of reading?

My intention for choosing this topic is that I am interested in technical things in general, but especially in computers. o me it seems very interesting to catch a glimpse of the future and to have an outlook on the future. On the other hand I have already read some e-books and know something about them.
At first I want to give some information on e-books in general and the development of the e-book.
An e-book is a book in digital form. Concerning the content e-books are similar to real books - for example the directory and the pagination. But the advantage of digital media is for example the possibility of searching for specific words. The first e-book was published in 1993 - it was the manual of a computer game and in PDF-format. In 1999 to 2000 the first tries of real commercialization started. Nowadays especially professional literature is published in the digital form; there are approximately 1000 titles available.
As I already said above I still have read some e-books. I have had the pleasure to read some e-books myself which was quite a nice experience. I read these e-books because on the one hand they were only available on the internet and not in printed form and on the other hand they were for free. If I would have read these texts in a book, I would have been forced to buy them for much money. Because of the fact that these stories were not published because it is a really specific topic that should not be publicized I had to read the e-book and did not regret it until today, because they were very interesting books to read. Certainly it would have been easier to have a printed book, to have the possibility to read it in the evening before I go to sleep, but it was not very uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer either with something to eat beneath me and read the interesting book. When I got tired, I set a bookmark and was able to continue reading where I had stopped the day before. Usually if I read a book, I am too lazy to take a bookmark and I also think that I am clever enough to remember where I stopped. But often this is not the case and the next day I have to search for the right page very long. Asking me, this is really annoying and a minus for a printed book. I would read an e-book again at any time, if I was not able to purchase it cheaply in the printed form. In the first instance it is important for pupils to have access to a large amount of information without paying a lot of money. Since e-books are for free they are a good possibility for pupils to save some money but still get the same information. The only negative aspect is that it can be a little bit more exhausting to read a long text with hundreds of pages on the computer. Nevertheless it is possible to do something else while reading the e-book. You can for example visit a forum, listen to music and chat with other people while you are sitting in front of the computer and reading a book. If you are not able to do several things at the same time you can as well shut all other programs and disturbing things down so that you can read calmly. For me it is normal to cope with many tasks at the same time, but some friends of mine and relatives sometimes wonder how this is possible. They say that I will go insane, if I keep on doing it. But they also have to admit that it is really amazing that I am very good at things which have to do with the computer. That could be the reason why I am really interested in reading e-books, whereas my relatives and other people are not willing to read an e-book. Asking me they are not really adept at things that have to do with the computer. Because of this they are scared to encounter new things they do not know. For me an e-book is a reasonable invention with good perspectives but still some decisive objections. Nevertheless the printed book has some disadvantages, too. In my opinion e-books are just one out of many examples for digitalisation. Other examples are music on CD’s, movies on DVD or catalogues on the internet. It is a corollary to publish texts and other things in the digital media. But the DVD or the CD do not have any disadvantages, the e-book unfortunately has. Usually it is uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer and read a book. Normally you prefer to lie on the bed or sit on a couch while reading a book and enjoy the warm and cuddle feeling. With a notebook it is possible to do that, too, but it is still tiring for the eyes. They have to cope with glaring light and the noise of the ventilators could disturb the nice silence. You always have to scroll down in order to get to the next page and you cannot lie down. But in case you have to wear glasses you can as well enlarge the script. Furthermore you are able to search for text passages in particular without having to search through the whole book. Another positive aspect is that nowadays e-books are often for free. But you cannot take a notebook to the doctor and read it in the waiting room. Furthermore it is not possible to equip every student with a notebook to be able to read school lecture.
Asking me printed books still have some advantages today, but being smaller and more portable devices like handhelds are a step into the right direction. In some it could be reality that nearly every person is reading e-books. How wonderful would it be to share the texts with other users of e-book-devices and get a new virtual book for free. It would be possible, if the digital rights management allowed it. But this is another disadvantage - other people could define which books you are allowed to read and which are not. This could be a high risk for your personal freedom. But the e-book could be the future of reading, because it will be more necessary to save paper and valuable forests in future.

 
Antwort von GAST | 04.03.2007 - 08:52
ähm... ich hab englisch lk und ne lehrerin die jeden shceiß einsammelt und benotet und alle fehler anstreicht.. auch ehler die gar keine sind ^^ naja irgendwann gewöhnt man sich dran und versucht einfach das beste irgendwie rauszuholen
den letzten endgültigen text hab ich mir jetzt noch nicht angeguckt, weil ich gleich weg muss, mach ich aber heute abend...

 
Antwort von GAST | 04.03.2007 - 12:42
Choose one section of questions and answer them extensively in one text.
c) Have you ever read a novel or story online, or an e-book? Do you think that this is going to be the future of reading?

My intention for choosing this topic is that I am interested in technical things in general, but especially in computers. To me it seems very interesting to catch a glimpse of the future and to have an outlook into the future. On the other hand I have already read some e-books and know something about them.
At first I want to give some information on e-books in general and the development of the e-book.
An e-book is a book in digital form. Concerning the content e-books are similar to real books - for example the directory and the pagination. But the advantage of digital media is for example the possibility of searching for specific words. The first e-book was published in 1993 - it was the manual of a computer game and in PDF-format. In 1999 to 2000 the first tries of real commercialization started. Nowadays especially professional literature is published in the digital form; there are approximately 1000 titles available.
As I already said above, I have read some e-books in the past and it was quite a nice experience. I read these e-books because on the one hand they were only available on the internet and not in printed form and on the other hand they were for free. If I would have read these texts in a book, I would have been forced to buy them for much money. Because of the fact that these stories were not published because it is a really specific topic that should not be publicized I had to read the e-book and did not regret it until today, because they were very interesting books to read. Certainly it would have been easier to have a printed book, to have the possibility to read it in the evening before I go to sleep, but it was not very uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer either with something to eat besides me and read the interesting book. When I got tired, I set a bookmark and was able to continue reading where I had stopped the day before. Usually if I read a book, I am too lazy to take a bookmark and I also think that I am smart enough to remember where I stopped. But often this is not the case and the next day I have to search for the right page a long time until I find it. Asking me, this is really annoying and a minus for a printed book. I would read an e-book again at any time, if I was not able to purchase it cheaply in the printed form. In the first instance it is important for pupils to have access to a large amount of information without paying a lot of money. Since e-books are for free they are a great opportunity for students to save money, but still get a lot of information. The only negative aspect I found was that it can be a little bit more exhausting to read a long text with hundreds of pages on the computer. Nevertheless it is possible to do something else while reading the e-book. You can for example visit a forum, listen to music and chat with other people while you are sitting in front of the computer and reading a book. If you are not able to do several things at the same time you can as well shut all other programs and disturbing things down so that you can read calmly. For me it is normal to cope with many tasks at the same time, but some friends of mine and relatives sometimes wonder how this is possible. They say that I will go insane, if I keep on doing it. But they also have to admit that it is really amazing that I am very good at things which have to do with the computer. That could be the reason why I am really interested in reading e-books, whereas my relatives and other people are not willing to read an e-book. Asking me they are not really adept at things that have to do with the computer. Because of this they are scared to encounter new things they do not know. For me an e-book is a reasonable invention with good perspectives but still some decisive objections. Nevertheless the printed book has some disadvantages, too. In my opinion e-books are just one out of many examples for digitalisation. Other examples are music on CD’s, movies on DVD or catalogues on the internet. It is a corollary to publish texts and other things in the digital media. But the DVD or CD do not have any disadvantages, the e-book unfortunately has. Usually it is uncomfortable to sit in front of the computer and read a book. Normally you prefer to lie on the bed or sit on a couch while reading a book and enjoy the warm and cuddle feeling. With a notebook it is possible to do that, too, but it is still tiring for the eyes. They have to cope with glaring light and the noise of the ventilators could disturb the nice silence. You always have to scroll down in order to get to the next page and you cannot lie down. But in case you have to wear glasses you can as well enlarge the script. Furthermore you are able to search for text passages in particular without having to search through the whole book. Another positive aspect is that nowadays e-books are often for free. But you cannot take a notebook to the doctor and read it in the waiting room. Furthermore it is not possible to equip every student with a notebook to be able to read school lecture.
Asking me printed books still have some advantages today, but Handhelds being smaller and more portable devices than laptops are a step into the right direction. In a few years it could be reality that nearly every person is reading e-books. How wonderful would it be to share the texts with other users of e-book-devices and get a new virtual book for free. It would be possible, if the digital rights management allowed it. But this is another disadvantage - other people could define which books you are allowed to read and which are not. This could be a high risk for your personal freedom. But the e-book could be the future of reading, because it will be more necessary to save paper and valuable forests in future.

 
Antwort von GAST | 04.03.2007 - 19:42
du kannst nicht "on the other hand" schreiben, wenn du nicht vorher "on the one hand" hast... was meinst du warum ich dir da bei der berichtigung "furthermore" hingesetzt hab? im deutschen geht das, aber nicht im englischen..
und "asking me" geht auch nicht... das is auch sowas deutsches. "in my opinion" oder "in my point of view" oder "to my mind"!
naja das waren so die beiden sachen die mir ins auge gesprungen sind, aber den rest hab ich jetzt nicht nochmal gelesen... hast doch eh nichts mehr verändert, oder?

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