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Hallo,ich muss einen einleitungstext für eine diskussion schreiben.wäre lieb wenn mal jemand schauen könnte,ob man das alles so schreiben kann,oder was man besser schreiben könnte.klingt nämlich voll komisch ^^

My name is Theresa Ruhl and I am from Germany.
I lost my job last year,because the immigrants work for fewer money and so we have to go. I have search for a new job for a lot of months,but until today I don’t found anything and that is all because of the immigrants. There are to much. Some of them don’t want to work,but they get work. And I want to work and I got nothing. I am the opinion that immigrants who don’t want to work and Don’t integreate to Germany, have to go back to their homecountry.