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Hei Leute, Könnt ihr das bitte korrigieren Bitte _Grammatik Und Rechtsschreibfehler den ganzen Text bitte korrigieren Bitte ?

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IKEA Ingvar Kampard

Today I am talking about the entrepreneur Ingvar Kamprad.
He was a Swedish entrepreneur and the founder of the IKEA. Ingvar Kamprad`s mother was Swedish, his father was German and he came to Sweden with his parents when he was one year old.

He was born on 30 March 1926 and died on 28 January 2018. He had three children and had married twice. He was one of the richest people in the world.

Even as a child he traded in many different goods, including matches and pencils. Therefore, he wanted to open a shop with furniture and services.

At the age of 17, Kamprad finished school and as a reward received a monetary gift from his father. With this he founded his company IKEA in 1943. In 1947 he added furniture and, in that year, he also published his first catalog. The first IKEA furniture store was opened in southern Sweden in 1958. In 1977 Ikea was opened in Austria.,

Ikea`s passion is life at home. The vision of Ikea is to create a better everyday life for the many people.

His original idea was to sell goods and commodities at a low price, in large quantities. The name IKEA is derived from his initials. The IKEA concept is brought to life through the furniture stores, catalogue and via the Internet and apps.

He became very successful because he kept on going and did not listen to anyone. Furthermore, he became successful because he sold the goods cheaper than his competitors with good quality.

Ikea has over 200,000 employees and an annual turnover of 38 billion euros.

Ikea also looks at sustainability by using less plastic.

Ikea sold various consumer goods, including pens, wallets, picture frames, tablecloths, watches, matches and jewellery.

-UND Bitte sagt was ich noch daran für Informationen hinzufügen muss? Über den Ikea Unternehmen und Erfinder davon?
Frage von Leila32 | am 11.10.2020 - 11:57

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Antwort von matata | 11.10.2020 - 14:08
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ist das? Eine Zusammenfassung? Wo steht der Text im Original?
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Antwort von Leila32 | 11.10.2020 - 16:24
ja meine zusammenfassung

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Antwort von matata | 11.10.2020 - 16:56
Und wo steht das Original des Textes? Oder hast du einfach Fakten zum Ikea-Gründer zusammengetragen aus dem Internet?
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Antwort von Ratgeber | 11.10.2020 - 23:47
Du hast in diesem Forum schon Korrekturen zum Text angeboten bekommen...


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Antwort von Leila32 | 12.10.2020 - 20:42
Passt das so?:

Today I am talking about the entrepreneur Ingvar Kamprad. He was a Swedish entrepreneur and the founder of the IKEA. Ingvar Kamprad`s mother was Swedish, his father was German and he came to Sweden with his parents when he was one year old.
He was born on 30 March 1926 in Agunnaryd, Sweden and died on 27 January 2018, in Småland, Sweden.He had four children. His children are Mathias Kamprad, Annika, Peter Kamprad and Jonas Kamprad. He had been married twice. With his first wife Kerstin Wadling he was married 10 years and with his second wife Margaretha Kamprad 48 years.

He was one of the richest people in the world.
Even as a child he traded with many different goods, including matches and pencils. Therefore, he wanted to open a shop with furniture and services.
At the age of 17, Kamprad finished school and as a reward received a monetary gift from his father. With this he founded his company IKEA in 1943. In 1947 he added furniture and, in the same year, he also published his first catalog. The first IKEA furniture store was opened in southern Sweden in 1958. In 1977 IKEA was opened in Austria.
Ikea`s passion is life at home. The vision of IKEA is to create a better everyday life for the (many) people .

He published a book called Historia Ikea in 1999.
He has other organisations such as Ingka Foundation, Ikano Bank, Interogo Foundation, INGKA Holding, Inter IKEA Holding and Stichting IKEA Foundation.
His original idea was to sell goods and commodities at a low price, in large quantities. The name IKEA is derived from his initials. The IKEA concept is brought to life through the furniture stores, catalogue and via the internet and apps.
He became very successful because he kept on going and did not listen to anyone. Furthermore, he became successful because he sold the goods cheaper than his competitors with good quality.
IKEA has over 200,000 employees and an annual turnover of 38 billion euros.
It also looks at sustainability by using less plastic.
IKEA sold various consumer goods, including pens, wallets, picture frames, tablecloths, watches, matches and jewellery.

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Antwort von matata | 13.10.2020 - 02:55
Du hast den Text schon hier eingereicht

https://www.helplounge.de/489/englisch-text-aufgabe-thema

und Verbesserungsvorschläge bekommen. Das reicht nun. Denn verantwortlich für deine Arbeit bist du allein.
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