Cornwall: Referat bitte korrigieren

Hallo,
Es geht um einen englisches Refarat über einen Urlaub in Cornwall mit powerPoint.
Könnte da jemand drüber schauen und kurze Anmerkungen machen? Der Text ist vielleicht etwas lang - aber das wäre wirklich super nett, da ich etwas unsicher bin - gerade wenn ich vortragen muss. Vielen, vielen Dank!

This year, my family and I went to Cornwall in summer for three weeks. We spent our summer holidays there for the second time.
We drove by car and we needed two days for the journe until we
reached our destinatin. Our first station was a camp site near St.Ives . St Ives is a small seaside town in the north west of Cornwall. It isn’t far away from Land´s End, the most west point of England. In medieval times, St Ives was a busy fishing port. Most of the town was built in the 19th century. St . Ives is known by famous artists. Therefore today you still can visit some interesting museums. That´s our campsite Polmanter near St.Ives. There was a big pool, a playroom and a restaurant. And we got some tennis lessons for free. For the first two weeks we stayed in our camper. My brother and I slept in the roof of the car. My parents slept in the car under us.It was very cozy and a little bit closely .But after some rainy days we deceided that we will rent a flat for bed and breakfast next year. We visited St.Ives very often. The city has some beautyful beaches and nice shops.It also have some museums like the Tate. The Tate Galery is a world famous art museum in St.Ives. It´s fun to see the paintings and art objects but sometimes we didn´t understand. The Coastle Path is a 1034km (680Miles) hiking trail around Cornwall. We spent a few days there and hiked from St.Ives to Land´s End. Here you can see a map and some pictures. The Coastle Path is around Cornwall - alway at the coast and most of the time you can see the sea. We spent a few days there and hiked from St.Ives to Land´s End. After a hiking day we also stopped at a nice beach for swimming. Here you can see a map and some pictures. Our favourite beach is near Porthcuno and the Mineack Theater. There aren´t much people, because you have to climb down to the beach and it looks a little bit dangeous – espacially my mum didn´t like the way down. So she prefered to visit the Mineack Theater – an open air theater with a great view to the sea.
But my father and my brother prfered the the waves at the beach and we were body boarding there. The water was quite cold so we wore wetsuits. One day we visited the Eden Project. I liked the rainbowforest. You can see a lot of different plants and get a lot of information about plants and the country they grow.When we visited it, there was a special exhibition about the climate crisis. Our last station was the Scilly Islands. There are some islands in the west of conwall.
You can get to them by plane or ship. Last year we took the plan but this year we tried the boat...but it was a very rough crossing to St Mary`s – the main islan and then we took a small boat to Tresco – the isand we stayed.
On the boat nearly very one was sea sick because of the rough sea. I didn´t feel very well but my eating stayed in my stomach and I didn`t have to vomit. My brother and my mum had to vomit like many other passengers.
But then we had some really great days, perfect beaches and we styed in a very nice hotel with typical english breakfast!
Treco is known for the beautiful amazing gardens – we didn´t visit them yet but nex year we ´ll do that. We have alredy decided to come back – because we want boating between the islands then. Next year we´ll be back!