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A NORMAL DAY AT AN AMERICAN HIGH SCHOOL

DESCRIPTION OF AMERICAN HIGH-SCHOOL

High schools are well known as typical American schools, but countries like Canada, the Philippines, New Zealand, South Africa have high schools too .

High schools can be considered as secondary schools, which means that there are classes from 9th to 12th grade.

High schools are similar to our German "Gesamtschulen", integrated schools. This means, that the performance or academic level of students does not play such an important part in high schools as in the German school system. Almost everyone in the USA aged 13 to 18 attends a high school .

In the USA, after six years of elementary school, students change to middle school, which is also known as junior high school. After that, they attend at the actual high school, which is called senior high school or senior high.

In senior high school, the classes are not only marked with numbers, but the students of the individual classes also have special names, for example the 9th grade is called "freshmen". The 10th grade is called "sophomore", the students from the 11th grade are "juniors" and the 12th grade is called "seniors".

The schools are strict, so that the students have to carry a hall pass during the lessons if they have to go to toilet. Leaving the school grounds during the lessons is strictly controlled. In American schools they have a dress code. The students dress must be neat and clean at all times. They are not allowed to wear too small, too tight, see-through, or torn clothing. Students, who break these rules are send home to change their dress .

The construction of schools is different from school district to school district. In some states the students have to go to high school until they are 18. In other states they are allowed to leave school at the age of 16 or 17, if the parents agree. The traditional construction for high schools is from 9th to 12th grade but the demarcation of middle school and highschool is out of focus.

A high school graduation either ends with the middle maturity (Mittlere Reife ), the advanced technical college certificate (Fachhochschulreife) or the A Level (Abitur). It depends on the required classes you have to take to get your current graduation.

Its usual for the students to use a school bus that is only for students.
The use of the school bus is free. The School buses are yellow because of the good visibility on mornings so they can avoid an accident. In high schools, hours are usually from 7.30am to 2pm or 2.30pm. This is divided into six one-hour classes or four 90-minute classes (with a five-minute break between classes) and a 30-minute lunch break. Extra curricular activities and sports are scheduled after school hours. It`s common for pupils to take a packed lunch to school, although many pupils go home for lunch when they live close to school. High school students are provided with a locker where they can store their books and other possessions.

American schools are more into extracurricular activities, they are as important as lessons. For example they have american football, soccer, basketball, baseball, swimming, volleyball, athletics and cheerleading and they also have clubs like theater club and debatin club.

In Germany we have grades from 1 to 6 in the USA they have letters from A to F. For example A is excellent and F is Failure . In Germany the school day isn`t usually in the afternoon but in the USA there is school until 3 pm every day.
There vacation is 3 months in summer while ours are just six weeks. They have still christmas holidays and spring break.

Anmerkung: Ich bin nicht der Beste im Fach Englisch, ein paar Fehler sind mir aufgefallen und ich habe sie fett markiert korrigiert. Manche Leerzeichen habe ich verbessert: Vor einem Satzzeichen gehört kein Leerzeichen, sondern nur danach. Mit der Zeichensetzung bin ich mir unsicher.
Da ich den Text verstanden habe, kann es ja nicht so schlecht sein...