The Royals: Referatvobereitung korrigieren, bitte

Hallo! Also ich muss am Dienstag ein Referat über die Royals halten. Es soll höchstens drei Minuten dauern. Wäre nett wenn jemand mein Referat mal überfliegen könnte und mir sagen könnte was ich noch verbessern kann. Liebe Grüße und Vielen Dank im Voraus.

Today I will tell you something about my topic. The Royals. The Royals are the british royal family.
So who can consider hisself as a royal? Although there is not really an definition of it, usually its the close relatives to the queen or the king.
Now I will get a bit more into detail about the most famous royals. I will start with the Queen, Queen Elizabeth the second. She is the head of United kingdom for 65 years, therefore she is the longest governing head of United Kingdom. She is also the of the Commonwealth Realms, which consists of Panama, Canada, United Kingdom, North Ireland and some more countries. She is 91 years old. She is married with Prince Philip, Duke of Edinburgh. They married 70 years ago, though the marriage was a bit complicated because Philip had relatives that had connections to Nazis and because they married a couple of years after the end of the 2nd World War, many people complaint about it.
They had four children, but I will only get into the oldest one, his name is Charles, he is the Prince of Wales.
He had two children with Diana, but now he is married with Camilla Parker Bowles. The older son is William, Duke of Cambridge, he is very well known, even in Germany, because of his very popular wedding with Catherine. Henry, or better known as Harry, is the Prince of Wales. He is also very well known here, but mostly because of his many scandals. And even though the royals dont rule the United Kingdom, they are a very sympathic and a famous family and they are also an attraction of United Kingdom. Because of the tradition and their symbol as U.K. government.
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