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Dear diary, 5.9.2016

Today was the first day at my new school. It was terrible!
I woke up and it was 7:45 am so I ran downstairs and had breakfast.
At 8:15 I was in the classroom. All the girls wispered and laughed about me. I fell so sad. But thats not all the teachers wern`t cool as my old ones. The schol ends and I was so glad but then the girls at my class came to me. They said: "Oh my God, how are you dressed up are that the clothes from your brother!" I sayed noththing and ran out of the school. At home went on my room and cried. But now I can say that I don`t have to hear what the others say it`s my live and my style!