Photography: Vortrag korrigieren

Hi,
ich habe es selber nochmal überprüft und ein paar Fehler gefunden.
Würde mich aber trotzdem freuen wenn bei dem Korrigierten noch einmal jemand drüber schauen könnte. Da ich es morgen schon halten muss.
LG

Our structure:

• First we want to answer the question : What is art for us?.
  Then we have some basic facts about photography
  After this some kinds
  Then the history with the first camera and the first photo
  Last but not least some famous photos and photographer
  

So what is art?
In my opinion there is no right answer of the question which is established for everybody.
You have to find your own definition.
When I thought about this question,
it was very hard to find solution, that I can say: Okay this is art for me. Then I tried to enumerate all the things which are from my point of view art. But after I while, I saw art in nearly everything. For example how you dress, who you decorate your home or how you tell something. I came to the conclusion, that I have to say that the whole life is art with all the things you make or feel. The point is, that you express yourself and sometimes you show it to the others.

One kind of art is photography, the topic we want to talk about.

Basic facts:
Photograph is deduced from the ancient creek. The word Photo means light and the word graphy means drawing. Together photography means drawing with light. And when you try to define the word photography you could say, that it is the art of capturing a moment, which you can hold forever. With photography, you can express yourself and show your feelings. Since you decide what you want to photograph.
Kinds:

There are many kinds of photography. Today, we want to present you four kinds together with some own photos.(J)

Portrait Photography:
Portrait Photography is the art of capturing a person or a small group of people, where the focus is on the persons´s face, to show the expressions, the personality and the mood of the people.
But this does not mean, that the persons body or even the background will no longer be included.
Unlike other photography styles the person of the portrait photography are often non-professional models. This means that often ordinary people for example the father or the kids are the subjects
in a portrait photography. For example here you can see my uncle.

Macro photography:
Macro photography or macrography is an extreme close up photography, in which the size of the subject, in the photography is greater than the life size. These subjects are often very small for example animals or plants. For macrography, you need a special lenses and sometimes a tripod that you don`t wiggle and that you can go very close. Here you can see a daisy. And with this real daisy you can see the difference between the size in the photography and the life size.

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And now I want to show you the most noted photo of the world.
In this picture you can see a wine-growing area in the near of the city Napa in California. Its called „Bliss“(Grüne Idylle) and was photographed by Charles O´Rear in January 1998.
I am sure, that many of you think, that they never seen this picture. But I am really confident, that everyone of you have seen it. To show this I want to show you this picture. Does anyone see the picture for the first time? ….. Okay this is the default computer wallpaper of Microsoft Windows XP.
You see the rolling green hills and the blue sky with the clouds. And when you compare this two pictures you can see that the picture by Charles O´Rear was the basis for the well-known Wallpaper of Windows XP. And because of this, the photo with the simple subject, the wine- growing area is the most noted photo of the world.