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Ich möchte euch bitten mal den Text durchzulesen und mich auf Fehler und Verbesserungsvorschläge hinzuweisen. Danke im vorraus:)


[b]Opera House[/b]

Hello.
Today I want to tell you something about the Sydney Opera House.
My Presentation has got 4 topics.
First of all I’d like to give you some information’s about this special building.
Secondly I tell you something about the size.
Thirdly I talk about the inside fashioning.
And at last I also talk about the opera house today.
1.
In the End of the 1940s, the population of Sydney had the Idea that the city
should have an own Opera-house. Good look of the Opera-house was very
helpful too.
The Bennelong Point, which was a half-island in the harbour of Sydney, was
chosen to be the place where the Opera-house should be build. The Danish architect Jorn Utzon who tried here, however, for the first time
internationally won the international advertising to which 233 proposals were
submited, in 1957. Among the rest, a respectable declares was given him also
from fashionably Australian architect Harry Seidler. Utzons design reminds of the sails of a ship what is well effective, because the
opera-house was built directly by the sea. However, in the 1990s the architect
opened that the segments of an orange of the styling form the basis.
In 1959 began the construction work. The high point of the official delivered discussion was in 1966 the
resignation Utzons which left virtually overnight Australia and should never
again put a foot on the fifth continent.
A group of young Australian architects brought the work to an end.
The opera-house of Sydney is one of the most eye-catching and most famous
buildings of the 20th century and the landmark of Sydney. It goes on the
design of the Danish architect and Pritzker price owner Jørn Utzon back. In
2007 UNESCO (=United Nations Educational, Scientific, and Cultural
Organization) privileged the house as an UNESCO world tradition.
2.
So my next point is about the size of the building.
The building is 183 metres long, 118 metres wide and covers a surface of
about 1.8 hectares. His unmistakeable roof rises 67 metres high and is dressed
up with 1,056,000 glazed, white ceramic tiles which were imported from
Sweden. 580 posts which rise 25 metre deep in the ground carry about a
160,000 tonnes heavy building.
3.
Now some information’s about the inside fashioning.
The opera-house contains five theatres with a total of 5532 seats: The concert
hall with 2679 seats, the opera theatre with 1547 seats, the drama Theatre
with 544 seats, the Playhouse with 398 seats and the studio Theatre with 364
seats. All together there are about 100 rooms, under it 5 test studios, a
cinema, and 60 changing rooms, 4 restaurants, 6 bars and many souvenir
stores. The electricity supply would be enough for a town with 25,000 people
and encloses 645 kilometres in electric cables.
4.
Now I am on the last point from my presentation.
It’s about the opera house today.
Today the opera-house of Sydney is a popular tourist attraction and beside
Sydney Harbour bridge the landmark of Sydney and together with the Uluru
the landmark of Australia.
Within the scope of Sydney festival now and then free concerts and other
events take place. So this is the end of my presentation. I hope you enjoyed it. Thank you for
listening.
Frage von xa.laura.xa | am 01.02.2016 - 20:28


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Antwort von Sara599 (ehem. Mitglied) | 16.03.2016 - 06:25
Ich glaube,
es ist alles richtig. Welche Klasse bist du denn?

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