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Ich habe folgenden Text geschrieben und würde Sie bitten diesen zu kontrollieren:
Today I want to talk about my sommer holidays.
I spend five days in Berlin, the capital of Germany. It is situated in the north of the countrie. My mum and I went there by train and we drived for 6 houres. After the drive I was very tired but happy to saw our hotel. The hotel was still greate. There ware a swimming pool, a spa to relax and a shopping mall intro the hotel. Our room was fantastic too. We had a sparedet living room, a bedroom and a big bathroom. I slept very fine at the first night. On our second day in Berlin my mum and I visited the Brandenburger Tor, the Reichstag and the TV tower. I really loved the tower, because I had a greate view. I saw the whole city. It was amazing, because the city ist very big. We would like to go in the Reichstag too, but sadly we can´t went inside, because there just were regisered visitors allowed. And then we went back to our hotel and I swam in the hotel pool. So I could relax a little bit. On the next day of our city trip my mum and I went to the Sealife, the Berlin Dungeon, and the Madame Tussauds, by underground. It ist the best way to travel in Berlin and very cheap too. The Sealife is a big aquarium with many fish within. I learned a lot about the different sorts of fish and how I could save them. The Dungeon wasn´t so well, because I was very scared from the actors. I preferred the Madame Tussauds. There were many popular people builted and you can potograp them. That was very funny. On our fourth day we just went shopping in a big mall wich is called Berlin Mall. I bought some souvenirs too and postcards for her friends. After our shopping trip we watched a movie in a cinema. It was an interesting documentary about the universe. I´ve enjoyed it. And on the last day of my summer vacation my mum and I went on a sightseeing trip through Berlin. So we saw many sights like the Checkpoint Charlie, the mure museum, the island of museum and much more. We drove by bus through the whole city. After our sight seeing trip we went to the train station to went at home. My holidays were greate.
Frage von Lisa.S.Fuchs | am 24.08.2015 - 19:24


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Antwort von matata | 24.08.2015 - 20:19
Wie hiess die Aufgabenstellung?
Ist das ein Aufsatz? Ein Bericht? Eine Zusammenfassung?
Was soll man korrigieren?
- Inhalt?
- Grammatik?
- Wortwahl?
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Antwort von Ratgeber | 24.08.2015 - 21:31
Verben
  • Spend – spent - spent 
  • Drive – drove - driven 
  • Build – built - built       


Rechtschreibung
  • countrie => country  
  • houres =>   hours  
  • greate view =>   great view  
  • ist very big =>  is very big  
  • It ist the best way =>   It is the best way  
  • potograp =>   photograph  oder to take pictures  
  • wich is called =>  which is called

Vokabelwahl
  • drive Zugfahrt => train ride oder train run oder train trip  oder train journey 
  • On the next day of our city trip=> The following day … 
  • mure museum => Checkpoint Charlie Museum 
  • the island of museum => Museum Island  
  • we went to the train station to went at home => … to go back home   

Grammatik:
  • I was very tired but happy to saw ourhotel. => … to see our hotel
  • There were a swimming pool, a spa to relax and a shopping mall within the hotel. 
  • We would like to go in the Reichstag too, but sadly we can´t went inside, because there just were regisered visitors allowed => We’d liked to have visited the Reichstag, but sadly we couldn´t go (oder get) inside, because there were just registered visitors allowed.    

Verständnisfrage
  • The hotel was still greate. (?)  
  • We had a sparedet  (zusätzlich?) living room  
  • I bought some souvenirs too and postcards for her friends. (nicht my friends?)    

Zusätzliche Erläuterungen für diejenigen, die noch nicht in Berlin waren: 
The Dungeon, a 60 minute journey into 700 years of Berlin`s horrible history, wasn´t so well, because I was very scared by the actors. 


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Antwort von Lisa.S.Fuchs | 25.08.2015 - 06:49
Schonmal vielen Dank dafür! Zu den Verständnisfragen: 
1.) Das Hotel war wirklich großartig.
2.) Wir hatten einen separates Wohnzimmer.
3.) hier habe ich mich nur verschrieben :)

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