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A class  trip  to a concert 


A class from Windsor  school did a class trip to a  concert in London on the 20th march.
Many purses and  mobiles were  stolen  by  three thieves. There were stolen also valuables from a few pupils from Windsor school. The thieves were  seen by a woman . The culprits have wear black clothes and they  were very  tall. The  police try  to  find the thieves , but they  know how they  look exactly, because there is a security camera in  the  concert hall. If  you  want to  see the  thieves look at  the website police.com and if  you  have seen they somewhere ,call the  number 7617.