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Afew days ago I read an act, which Iconsidered an important issue.
For that reason I reflected about thisitem and I would like to present you my thoughts.I am going to discuss about the ways toteach a stundent. If it is supposed in general that all people mustgo to school, the legitimate question is:Should you go to home-schooling or not?
On the one hand you often hear peoplesay that it is a good idea to go to home-schooling.
First let menumerate some reasons, why it may be useful for students.
One argument for is that your teacherwould focus only on you. The reason for this is that you can show,how you are really. For example, you are in a normal and you wouldlike to say something.Some people could laugh about you, ifyou say something wrong.
Second, you get intensive and flexbleteaching. The reason for this is, when you are in a normal class, itgives some people, which disturb the lessons. So teacher must repeatthe lesson or to speack about the problems this students. So thehome-schooling is useful, because something like this doesn´t arise.
Onother argument for is that theparents could be allowed to tell the teachers, what the people mustn´t learn. For example, the parents don´t want that the peoplelearn thinks, like about the sexeducation….ist nur ein Beispiel, da mir nichts einfiel.....
On the other hand people think that thehome- schooling is a bad way to teach someone.There a several reasons for this.
First, when you go to a normal school,you would have more experience.In a normal school you learn, how tobehave or to hear various opinions from the classmate.Something like this you don´t learn athome-schooling.
Second, if your parents are yourteacher, they don´t have good methods to teach childrens.The real teachers have learn, how toteach something.
Onther significant point is that thehome-schooling is something boring. The reason for this is you sitthere alone and you don´t have a friend to speak with them.
Weighing the pros and cons,I come tothe conclusion that the cons are more impressiv than the pros.So all in all I believe that thehome-schooling is bad way to teach someonce becaus you don´t collectexperience how to be a proper student. This deciosion is as far as Ican see the right.