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My Name is John ****, I am 16 years old and attendthe comprehensive school **** in ****.
My expected school graduation will be the FOR with the qualificationto passmy Abitur examination (A-level).
My plans for the next three years will beto keep the level of my grades and to pass my Abitur examination with a good grade average (2.0+).


I am in [---] class 10A and my class teachers are Mr.**** and Mrs. ****.
My favourite subjects are Sports, History,
Technics and of course English with Mr.****.
My weak subjects are Maths, English?1) and Art.

[---] I am bad at learning languages, I`m afraid, and I amalso not talented in Maths.
My favourite teachers are Mr.****, Mr.**** (even though he sometimes behaves like an alien) and Mrs. ****.


My friends and employers concider me as a helpful, sporty , communicative, powerful and nice person. So I have the strength of working in a team.
In addition I am punctual at school or at work, reliable when my teachers or my employers have givenme an order. Furthermore I can say about myself that I am very neat and correct, for example all my school folders and exercise books are very well organized. I am also creative and do my work with care. I will always be among the first and I try to make no mistakes.
I can point outas some of my additional skillsthat I can cope with stressful situations and have a predetermined discipline, because I work in a restaurant and I have done two practical work trainings .


My first practical work training was at the car workshop BMW in Düsseldorf. I learned there how to repair cars.
For example I was able to change [---] oil or to change [---] winter tyresagainst summer tires. Or to repair [--] engine components [---]with the help of my colleagues.
The other practical work training was at the Volksbank in Düsseldorf. There I learned to communicate with customers and how to use the money counting machine.
In both trainings I got a very good feedback, the employers gave me a reward.


My dreamjob is to play football as a pro for Real Madridor for
Bayern Munich.
But that is a dream, so Ilike to do a sporty job, I love sports. Because I do it every day, in a club or in my freetime.
For example, sport teacher or police officer are good sportive jobs.
Or I like to become a plane pilot, if I find
a rich person who can sponsor my flight license.
But before I start to work, I have to spend a lot of my time to learn English with Mr.****.
Indeed it is a long and difficult way, but who knows?
Maybe it will happen and I will be able to speak someday better English than Mr.****, because I enjoy and accept challenges daily.