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Hallo leute ich muss am Montag nächste Woche meine Facharbeit abgeben und ich fänds echt toll von euch, wenn einer meine Summary korrigieren könnte.. Bitteeee


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The novel "Brick Lane" is written by Monica Ali and published in 2003. It is about Nazneen who leaves Bangladesh, Gouripur, at age eigtheen to come to London, for an arranged marriage. During the whole story we get to know how Nazneen’s life is controlled by the Fate. Nazneen grows up in Bangladesh and after her sister Hasina skip off with sixteen, her Abba (father) finds her a much older man Chanu, who lives in London. Her mother died on suicide when she was fourteen. In England they live in the district Brick Lane, the "Little-India" in London. The characters defines Bangladeshi people in London years after they left Bangladesh. First she is only at home, takes care of the house, cares for her husband, knows only two words in English and watchs the area only through the window. She wants to learn English, but her husband thinks it is unnecesary. Her life becomes different and she has trouble to get used to it. Mrs.Islam is her first friend who called on Nazneen. Another good friend is Razia whose friendship gets better during the time. Hasina, her sister who skiped off, send her always letters and tells her about her life. At the Beginning Nazneen does her duties at home, but with the time she gets annoyed of it. She does rebellions, like putting Chanus unwashed socks back in his drawer, but he does not notice it. About her husband she thinks that she doesn´t want to see him again,because she does not like him. He is a man who always talks but never does the things he says. His work is in a state institution and he wants to get a promotion at work but none of the things he says come to fruition. He wants to go back to Bangladesh, but first he does not do anything for this. Chanu and Nazeen don´t love each other, but they respect each other. Nazneen becomes a son, Mohammad Raqib, who dies in a young age because of a disease. When her son died, arises a kind of closeness between the couple. During the illness of her son she gets a different view of her husband. She thinks that her father has found a good man for her, becaue for the first time she sees that he is like her. They are take different paths, but they journey together. After 13 years she has two daughters, Shahana and Bibi. She learns Enligsh and gets used to her marital obligations and motherhood. She begins to work as a seamstress at home. Her husband Chanu begins a work as a taxi driver,because he has terminate from his old job and wants to earn money for returning to Bangladesh. Her older daughter, Shahana, often fights with her father, because she wants to adapt to British life. Chanu thinks he is an educated and a modern man, but he is not and this is a problem for Shahana. Now where he has two daugthers and wants to protect them from the British life before they can be spoiled by British ways, he decides to return to Dhaka seriously and works himself up to do it. Nazneens sewing brings a young man named Karim for her. Nazneen is interrested in him, because in contrast to Chanu, he has found his place in this world. During the time she begins an affair with him. On the one hand she thinks it is wrong to do it and she wants to stop it, but on the other hand she can not stop it. She falls in live for the first time. Incidentally Karim is a member of a radical Muslim group, Bengal Tigers, and tries to convince Nazneen from his view. Nazeens goes to some meetings, but she is not really a member. At one meeting she learns from Mrs. Islam that Dr.Azad gives money to Chanu for turning back to Bangladesh. When the day comes Nazneen decides to stay in London with the children. Chanu decides to go back to Dhaka, because he can not stay in London. Nazneen chooses to go her own way, independent from her two men and seperates from Karim.
Frage von Englisch-Facharbeit (ehem. Mitglied) | am 13.02.2013 - 16:08


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Antwort von Englisch-Facharbeit (ehem. Mitglied) | 13.02.2013 - 16:09
Wenn
ihr keine Lust habt könnt ihr auch nur einzelne Sätze korrigieren wäre echt sehr nett :D


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Antwort von S_A_S | 13.02.2013 - 16:46
-can not schreibt sich zusammen
-watch gibt es nicht, das heißt waches
-"Nazneens sewing brings ", da fehlt wohl ein Genetiv Apostroph
-eigtheen -> eighteen
-unnecesary->unnecessary
-becaue -> because
-Enligsh-> English
-daugthers ->daughters
-seperates ->separates
-skiped ->skipped
-"The characters defines Bangladeshi " -> Wenn characters, dann define! Wenn aber character, dann defines! Aber nicht characters und defines.

Das ist das was ich jetzt mal beim querlesen gefunden habe. Ich habe den Text aber wirklich nur Quergelesen!


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Antwort von goldenoldie (ehem. Mitglied) | 14.02.2013 - 10:13
Zitat:
The novel "Brick Lane" [---]written by Monica Ali was published in 2003. It is about Nazneen who leaves Bangladesh, Gouripur, at the age of eighteen to come to London [---] for an arranged marriage. During the whole story we get to know how Nazneen’s life is controlled by the Fate. Nazneen grows up in Bangladesh and after her sister Hasina has skipped off with sixteen, her Abba (father) finds her a much older husband, Chanu, who lives in London. Her mother committed suicide when she was fourteen. In England they live in [---] Brick Lane district , London`s "Little-India".
The characters defines Bangladeshi people in London years after they left Bangladesh. (1)

First she is only at home, takes care of the house, cares for her husband, knows only two words in English and watches the area only through the window. She wants to learn English, but her husband thinks it is unnecesary. Her life has become different (2) and she has troubles of getting used to it. Mrs.Islam is her first friend who has called on Nazneen. Another good friend is Razia whose friendship gets better during the time. Hasina, her sister who
has skipped off, always sends her letters and tells her about her life. At the beginning Nazneen does her chores at home, but with the time she gets annoyed of it. She does rebellions, like putting Chanu`s socks unwashed back into his drawer, but he does not notice it. She thinks about her husband that she doesn´t want to see him again, because she does not like him. He is a man who always talks but never does the things he says. He works in a state institution and he wants to get a promotion at work but none of the things he has said have come to fruition. He wants to go back to Bangladesh, but first he does not do anything for this. Chanu and Nazeen don´t love each other, but they respect each other. Nazneen gets(3) a son, Mohammad Raqib, who dies in a young age because of a disease. After her son
has died, a kind of closeness arises between the couple. During the illness of her son she has got a different view of her husband. She thinks that her father has found a good husband for her, because for the first time she sees that he is like her.


Anmerkungen: (1) unverständlicher Satz: "defines"?

(2) different from what?

(3) "becomes" a son? ha, ha, ha! (may I become a beefsteak? I hope not!)


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Antwort von Englisch-Facharbeit (ehem. Mitglied) | 14.02.2013 - 18:29
Ich danke euch so sehr :D

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